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Parmigiano
Whenever I cook, I do it with ambition
to amaze your senses, to impress, to raise the bar…
How much Parmigiano is enough to ensure no abandonment
and permanent status of no-rejection?
I’ve built my life around these towers –
up, up into the light – lifting some more material
for yet another storey hall.
Let me grate you some more above the tasty pasta,
smile and chew with pleasurous moans another byte,
bit by bit into the clouds.
Come sit with me here, lets look
through these windows of thin achievement
and empty appreciation.
Do you love me? – the jackal asked the giraffe once again.
Right now, no… I’m eating pasta – with a full mouth she responded
full of thoughts gravitating around
that triangle shaped Parmigiano block.
Thinking to herself:
What is the lie I tell myself most often?
The Parmigiano is a lie.
(to Veronica)
to amaze your senses, to impress, to raise the bar…
How much Parmigiano is enough to ensure no abandonment
and permanent status of no-rejection?
I’ve built my life around these towers –
up, up into the light – lifting some more material
for yet another storey hall.
Let me grate you some more above the tasty pasta,
smile and chew with pleasurous moans another byte,
bit by bit into the clouds.
Come sit with me here, lets look
through these windows of thin achievement
and empty appreciation.
Do you love me? – the jackal asked the giraffe once again.
Right now, no… I’m eating pasta – with a full mouth she responded
full of thoughts gravitating around
that triangle shaped Parmigiano block.
Thinking to herself:
What is the lie I tell myself most often?
The Parmigiano is a lie.
(to Veronica)
Written by
debug
Published 21st Jul 2017
| Edited 9th Aug 2017
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Re. Parmigiano
9th Aug 2017 5:28am
Re: Re. Parmigiano
9th Aug 2017 11:05am
Hah,...the intrigue of it.... "your promised reward is merely a fictitious motivator" Sorry & thanks for the comment. That was it... my reward
Re. Parmigiano
21st Aug 2017 12:10pm
Well that was very misleading, but I love the uniqueness in your writes including this one, no two pieces are the same and I genuinly enjoy your work.
Another superb write!
V
Another superb write!
V
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Re: Re. Parmigiano
21st Aug 2017 2:30pm
Re: Re. Parmigiano
21st Aug 2017 4:25pm
Lol I'm so sorry I should have been more specific, reading the title I literally thought I would be reading a poem about food, but your word play made for a much more interesting poem. I loved it!
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Re. Parmigiano
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Aug 2017 12:01pm
22nd Aug 2017 11:59am
Damn it.. . you always do this to me
this one speared my side, gawd
jeezz!
ji just appreciate that brain of yours, and
you bring everything onto form your pieces
of soul
amazing as always, i felt this way down
this one speared my side, gawd
jeezz!
ji just appreciate that brain of yours, and
you bring everything onto form your pieces
of soul
amazing as always, i felt this way down
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Re: Re. Parmigiano
...and you always do this to me
pumping up that Ego of mine
Feels so good reading your comments.
Thank you!
pumping up that Ego of mine
Feels so good reading your comments.
Thank you!
Re. Parmigiano
18th Sep 2017 4:11am
Re. Parmigiano
11th Jul 2018 4:07am
Re: Re. Parmigiano
11th Jul 2018 5:55pm
A purveyor of fine flavours...
I'm afraid I'm quite the opposite...
and seriously not harmless...
under the facade
there's smell of dogfight
aged in bitterness
...and that's one thing
that just maybe
protects me from being very very badly hurt
I'm afraid I'm quite the opposite...
and seriously not harmless...
under the facade
there's smell of dogfight
aged in bitterness
...and that's one thing
that just maybe
protects me from being very very badly hurt
Re: Re. Parmigiano
11th Jul 2018 7:09pm
Re: Re. Parmigiano
12th Jul 2018 5:37am
Somehow poets like you do.
Other think we're some breed of naive romantics that believe people are basically good, so we write beautiful pastoral poems showing the idyll of life, including the above "culinary" piece.
But it's not "culinary" at all... and it has a dedication and a message, but as always it is ciphered, just as the subconscious is ciphered in all fuckin' things we do.
I'm so grateful you read this peace. It's an important poem for me.
Other think we're some breed of naive romantics that believe people are basically good, so we write beautiful pastoral poems showing the idyll of life, including the above "culinary" piece.
But it's not "culinary" at all... and it has a dedication and a message, but as always it is ciphered, just as the subconscious is ciphered in all fuckin' things we do.
I'm so grateful you read this peace. It's an important poem for me.
Re. Parmigiano
1st Aug 2018 11:52pm
Re: Re. Parmigiano
2nd Aug 2018 9:44am
Romantic:
- conducive to or characterized by the expression of love.
- of, characterized by, or suggestive of an idealized view of reality.
- a person with romantic beliefs or attitudes.
You should get a bit educated on what constitutes romantic. It's characterized by melancholia and idealised view or illusionary perception of the object of love or the world.
Nevermind... Thanks again for reading.
- conducive to or characterized by the expression of love.
- of, characterized by, or suggestive of an idealized view of reality.
- a person with romantic beliefs or attitudes.
You should get a bit educated on what constitutes romantic. It's characterized by melancholia and idealised view or illusionary perception of the object of love or the world.
Nevermind... Thanks again for reading.