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Redshift

like two galaxies
drift away from each other
that's the way we are

Written by applepie77

Published 18th Jul 2017

#haiku #universe

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Re. Redshift

19th Jul 2017 5:07am

makes me think of Marie again...

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Re. Redshift

19th Jul 2017 5:10am

... only to collide, time & time again !

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Re. Redshift

20th Jul 2017 10:40am

So sad in so few words. Thank you so much for sharing. Have a lovely day.

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Re. Redshift

Anonymous

25th Aug 2017 2:41am

Oooh apples!!..
come out..come out,
where ever you are!