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Eight
The deflated sequence of letters
So commonly premeditated
But rarely unvarnished
The strewn and dismembered
Limbs of the arachnid
I explicitly meant to unshackle
The sum of the facets
Of a malleable and carmine
Foreshadowing
The pattern of my gait,
Ataxic and absorbed
With passivity
A godless trinket
For the marring
Of my utopia
So commonly premeditated
But rarely unvarnished
The strewn and dismembered
Limbs of the arachnid
I explicitly meant to unshackle
The sum of the facets
Of a malleable and carmine
Foreshadowing
The pattern of my gait,
Ataxic and absorbed
With passivity
A godless trinket
For the marring
Of my utopia
Published 11th Jul 2017
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11th Jul 2017 4:49am
i really loved the last verse
A godless trinket
For the marring
Of my utopia
A godless trinket
For the marring
Of my utopia
11th Jul 2017 6:30am
spider: inelegant & lachrymose,
but it makes a charming tapestry;
your verses glow cochineal...
but it makes a charming tapestry;
your verses glow cochineal...
11th Jul 2017 8:12pm
12th Jul 2017 4:55am
Really like this piece, tight verses, love the imagery and structure. Bravo!
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
21st Jul 2017 10:42pm
Wow, this is excellent. Verbose yet comprehendible, a delicate balance. Not very often I read poetry that impresses me.
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