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Everything Fell Apart
And in one day,
My whole world, my life,
Fell apart. What the fuck happened?
I mean I was never okay,
But it was enough to change a fake smile
I wear everyday, to bleeding eyeliner
Rolling down my pale skin.
My soul has been emptied,
My heart is heavy,
My everything... Gone, lost,
Forgotten....
My whole world, my life,
Fell apart. What the fuck happened?
I mean I was never okay,
But it was enough to change a fake smile
I wear everyday, to bleeding eyeliner
Rolling down my pale skin.
My soul has been emptied,
My heart is heavy,
My everything... Gone, lost,
Forgotten....
Published 2nd Sep 2011
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So short yet so deep, i can feel the pain in your words! I hope you are ok, if you have any problems at all please contact me, ive been through a heartbreak (pretty serious) and i just wish to give back and help. howvere it is normal for you not to want any help at all, so you can figure it out yourself which may take longer, but will still work just as well! This poem speaks so much to me because all i've been through, this is a perfect description of a soul's/heart's break down. thank you for sharing this with us, hope all will be better <3
2nd Sep 2011 11:26pm
wow, thanks. it means alot that your here. thanks for likeing the poem. i was deeply hurt when i wrote it last night, and i felt helpless, like i didnt know what to do, so this came out of it..
2nd Sep 2011 7:45am
you captured the pain in so few words, the lesser the words the powerful it feels.
"But it was enough to change a fake smile
I wear everyday, to bleeding eyeliner"
those two lines are the most powerful lines in the poem, the words which define the poem. anyway beautifully done. keep writing.
"But it was enough to change a fake smile
I wear everyday, to bleeding eyeliner"
those two lines are the most powerful lines in the poem, the words which define the poem. anyway beautifully done. keep writing.
2nd Sep 2011 11:27pm
yea. thanks, and i thought it was pretty descriptive, bc thats what happened. im glad you like it
2nd Sep 2011 3:13pm
2nd Sep 2011 11:29pm
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4th Sep 2011 4:48am
-sighs- alot.. parental figures are fighting, my friend nearly killed himself, cousins in the hospitable, and now my friend has been a total ass to me and two guys that i dont even know have randomly messaged me and told me they hate me and want me dead, my best guy friend called me and screamed to me that he wanted me to die... i have no idea why...
11th Dec 2013 10:35pm
Your soul cannot be empty until it no longer ceases to exist. As human beings, we will always thrive for better. Our physical brains are programmed to do so. So even when it seems that everything has been demolished and you don't understand why and how so quick.. Just remember that there's always another day that will be different. That's how I live.
No matter how many times your stranded there saying wtf, how did this happen? There's still always a new chapter and another uprising in life that is yet to occur.. You just have to let it. :) Good saddening poetry, but personally it makes me not want to give up.
No matter how many times your stranded there saying wtf, how did this happen? There's still always a new chapter and another uprising in life that is yet to occur.. You just have to let it. :) Good saddening poetry, but personally it makes me not want to give up.
27th Dec 2013 5:54am
