Live Like A Jim Morrison Song

From the title to the last line , NICE !!!

thank you dearest Ragnar true story I was lost to this demon for years while my ex still is.. love Crim

Just Fucking awesome "great golden copulations" go ahead Lizard Queen mind fuck everything

"Everything is broken up in dances"

thank you Quiet one you gifted me with many smiles with your comment :) I deeply appreciate your presence.. love Crim

It is a rough affair to come back from. Glad you were able to break free. Amazing imagery dear.

thank you Tim me too was the roughest thing to quit that i've encountered.. love Brenda

I'm at work having a sneaky read but bookmarking my place to comment properly later.....you are a fucking force of nature woman omg.


B xx

thank you dearest B for such an amazing comment I'm smiling widely :) love Brenda

i do crim...people are strange in here...good one

thank you Messier I love that song yes we are indeed strange.. love Crim

ohmyholyfuckinggodswoman
this is poetry
love you heaps
xo

thank you beautiful one oh my goodness gracious how your presence & thoughts lights up my day.. love you lady :) Brenda

I wondered what path this one was going to take me down and when you hit that last stanza my heart was both happy and sad. So glad you found your way out, my lovely Dark Angel. Such a beautiful piece, beautiful one.

So much love for you...

thank you lovely one yes she was seductive but with an ugly bite.. I love you lady.. love Crim

A very captivating write,
your metaphors are supreme.
Glad you have made it back,
though sadden he has yet to return also.

thank you most graciously yes I too grieve that he didn't make it out & is still stuck there.. love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda, metaphorically this is exquisite and can be interpreted in few different ways because of that very fact...this was brilliant my love...always remember, the only behavior you can control is your own, despite how much you wish others could see things your way...my heart aches for the pain you still feel with him trapped where he is, one can only hope he too will see the light and walk clear from the path he is on...

I love you deeply

With all my love - Taryn xoxo

thank you my love for shining your love upon my pages.. yes i can only control me & yet i still grieve for the one left in the black.. I love you.. Brenda

The imagery here is spectacular. The use of flowers in your metaphors is really masterful, and the whole poem flows like wine.

thank you Jack most graciously you smile upon my page & i come alive with happiness.. love you my dear friend.. Brenda

Wish I'd seen this  before now.

thank you Jerry just glad you visited me my friend.. love you.. Brenda

Morrison LIKE

Brenda LIKE

YO

thank you dearest Poet you gifted me with smiles today :) love you.. xx Brenda

"I see your hair is burning
Your hills are filled with fire"

Jim Morrison is no match for you.  I'll take your lines anyday.

i fell for the life      
the orgasmic pleasure was divine      
we fucked like a Jim Morrison song      
with great golden copulations

Fine work Lady Crim.  You're a Twenty First Century Fox.      

thank you dearest Sir Crow you gifted me with smiles :) love Crim

sometimes quitting is a good thing and the only worthwhile thing to do - excellent struggle poem, simply moving :-)

1000 ehugs on their way :-)

thank you dearest David yeah it was just time to move on.. love & hugs Brenda

Fucking outstanding write from beginning to end and great title my friend I truly admire how ya cut tgroygh the BS and just flat out hit it outta the park.

Stay crazy

Gonz

thank you graciously Gonz for such a fantastic comment.. love Crim

You are ever evolving in your writing Crim.  Poppies used to be my favourite flower, but not for a long time now.  Beautiful piece. :)

thank you dearest Magdalena a better compliment I couldn't hope to receive.. love Brenda

This is brilliant

thank you most kindly.. love Crim

your images are so beautiful and so true.  I relate a lot.
What a brilliant write.

thank you graciously dearest Sara.. love Crim

Brenda.. such heartbreaking ink.. I'm simply blown away.. dig the title, and huge fan of Morrison..


"Before I Sink into the big sleep
I want to hear, I want to hear
the scream of the butterfly"

[James Douglas Morrison]

Always loved that verse.. thanks for sharing.. Love you, my sister..











Dave

thank you Dave for the wonderful Jim lyrics.. I love you.. Brenda

gotta go thru some dangerous doors to get there, Crim;
riders on the storm...

indeed & I did just that John funny your song would be riders on the storm that song was my mantra when I was kicking.. love Crim

I read this one this other day and had to come back to it..I love it!

thank you so happy you enjoyed.. love Crim