Hesperus

I see your still cheating on me woman! jk...
Outstandingly penned lady C... :)

thank you dearest Poe ;) love Crim

Always on spot. You never fail to deliver, Lady Crim.

thank you my Darkest Lord you honor me.. love Crim

cluster bombs of poetic symmetry gift wrapped with your Elysian twinkle. 🌹 crafted as only you can do.

thank you graciously dearest Quiet one for such a beautiful comment.. love Crim

This poem gives the reader an awful lot to consider, and much more to analyze. Always, always you are spot-on.  Talk to us about a birth of the star called earth.

thank you dearest Jerry I only scribe what I hear.. your grasp of this write brings me joy :) love you.. xo Brenda

A touching and honest poem. I hope Hesperus hears your prayer. Nice write, Crim.

thank you dearest Poet I believe he did :) love Crim

This is beautifully written Crim.

thank you kindly beautiful Eswaller.. love Crim

as always your poetry never disappoints  :-)

1000 ehugs winging their way to you :-)

thank you dearest David & neither does yours.. love & hugs Brenda

My beautiful Dark Angel, this is breathtaking. And you made me look something up for reference, I love that! So poignant and aching.

So much love for you...

thank you lovely one most graciously I am happy to know you along with me learned new words with this write.. love you lady.. xo Crim

Oh my!
How brightly burns your star!
🖤💙🖤

thank you graciously David though I am just a reflection of  its true brilliance.. love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda...this shows just how much heart you are made up of my love...embracing those which may hurt you and always hoping for them the best...

I love you deeply

With all my love - Taryn xoxo

thank you my love I thought that after I wrote now after careful consideration i've come to believe there is still much hidden from me.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda

Beautiful work Crim.  And thrilling:

i call to the four corners  
Hesperus come to me  
let us converse  
let's begin again my love  
 
he will not bring me to heel  
hold your head up  
& shake the shamayim  

"Shamayim"?  Hmmm...  Tambourine, maybe?  The foundations of the galaxy?  I'll do a Google search.  Loved this one in any case, Lady Crim!

thank you dearest Sir Crow the shamayim  is a Hebrew word for the heavens.. thank you for embracing me & this write.. love Crim

i loved this, beautiful one
kept hearing my life with the thrill kill cult as the poem progressed
& then the tune changed to something glorious & otherworldly
a damn fine write
love you heaps lady
xo

thank you beautiful one I adore your thoughts yes our lives come to play in the midst of all this how it will further evolve idk.. I love you lady.. love Brenda

Brenda.. every time i think i've seen your stunning brilliance, at it's fullest.. you raise the bar higher.. you never fail to deliver.. you inspire me.. i just find myself in awe of you.. great poetess, my friend, most of all my sister.. thank you.. for letting me read, collab, and just be a piece of you life.. love you!!


















Dave

thank you Dave most graciously I think myself a mere portal just a human who taps into what's out there.. I love having you a part of my life.. love you my brother.. Brenda

thank you graciously beautiful Dani :) love Brenda