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Weight
From the day you are born you gain weight;
Some more than others of course.
Mine seems to have never stopped!
From one diet to the next,
Calorie counting, shakes and bars...
Desperate to escape my excess -
Sadly lacking some success.
Is it time to give diets the chop?
Well, YES -
They don't bloody work!!
Some more than others of course.
Mine seems to have never stopped!
From one diet to the next,
Calorie counting, shakes and bars...
Desperate to escape my excess -
Sadly lacking some success.
Is it time to give diets the chop?
Well, YES -
They don't bloody work!!
Published 8th Jul 2017
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8th Jul 2017 6:35pm
They say that's when you start to lose weight, when you chunk it all and listen to your body instead!
9th Jul 2017 12:46pm
Anonymous
9th Jul 2017 2:52am
Hey Purple........it's hard to lose weight that's for sure.......don't stop believing in yourself.......cause your purple heart is shines beautifully.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Jul 2017 12:48pm
1st Sep 2017 6:33pm
Such an honest write. Well done on a topic that many struggle with. All we see are media pictures of "what is beautiful" that are rarely "untouched". We often lose site of what is truly lovely and attractive. I believe it is the soul and the spirit that makes someone beautiful...and you are. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you Mel44 for your comments. Much appreciated. The media definitely does not help. People mostly judge us on looks but like you I believe it is the soul and the spirit that does make someone truly beautiful. Thanks again.
