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Eternal Lover~with Diamonddave75
dear goddess
walking on dreams
moonlight rains
across your body
stars kiss your
divine lips
in the ashes
i’m created
to follow
and obey
i kiss you tenderly
with hushed tone
whisper you are kin
of my breathe
without you i am nothing
just a lonely cosmic drifter
i fashioned you from fantasies
Zues over my heart
your steps thunder
i tremble in your presence
as i anticipate
rolling in the depths with you
within the stars
dancing fierce
chosen gods
manipulated
for greater
goodness
we silence
all fears
our love making
is well renowned
our own see heaven's portal
inside our guiding poetics
secrets kept
lest our hidden children be seen
so we trace through the cosmos
gracefully illuminating
only the minds of the chosen
Published 7th Jul 2017
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2017 2:08am
Brenda.. thanks for dancing with me.. it's been to long.. love you forever my sister...
Dave
Dave
7th Jul 2017 2:23am
7th Jul 2017 2:20am
Magnificent both of you
Seamless. Who wrote what? 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Flawless thank you romance wings guide this piece
Seamless. Who wrote what? 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Flawless thank you romance wings guide this piece
7th Jul 2017 2:25am
thank you graciously dearest Quiet one my brother Dave started this piece.. love Crim
Anonymous
7th Jul 2017 4:50am
My Beautiful Brenda, as I just said to Dave, this flowed beautifully...your voices always have a way of flowing like a tranquil breeze...these were my favs my love...
"in the ashes
i’m created
to follow
and obey"
*
"our own see heaven's portal
inside our guiding poetics
secrets kept
lest our hidden children be seen
so we trace through the cosmos"
I love you madly, deeply
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
"in the ashes
i’m created
to follow
and obey"
*
"our own see heaven's portal
inside our guiding poetics
secrets kept
lest our hidden children be seen
so we trace through the cosmos"
I love you madly, deeply
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
9th Jul 2017 3:40am
thank you graciously my love i am caressed by the scent of the sweetest blooms whenever you grace my pages.. I cherish you.. I love you deeply.. Brenda
Anonymous
7th Jul 2017 4:51am
Nice collaboration!
9th Jul 2017 3:41am
Anonymous
7th Jul 2017 12:19pm
Your song is filled with such beautiful, calming harmony here. My lovely Dark Angel, you are an exquisite soul.
So much love to yiu...
So much love to yiu...
9th Jul 2017 3:42am
thank you graciously lovely one for such a beautiful comment.. love you lady.. xo Crim
Anonymous
7th Jul 2017 4:49pm
well done
9th Jul 2017 3:42am
8th Jul 2017 8:34pm
A wonderful collab with cosmic overtones, and I can't think of more divine deities for the eternity. Hope I can be counted among your Illuminati!
9th Jul 2017 3:43am
thank you dearest Sir Crow just something from our imaginations :) but of course the eternity would be dull & lonely without you.. love Crim
