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Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
You are not the
center of my universe
you are the celestial quilt
the anti-matter thread
binding vastness in
the whisper of gravity
the sun does not warm you
for you are a supernova of
continuance amaranthine
comets swirl and tango in
the galaxies of your lanterns
pulse drums ripple serenading
weeping ethereal strands
entwined we rest woven in
supernal ecstasy undulating
like forgotten constellations
drifting inner dimensionally
placating serenity to inhaling chimes
to paint tapestries of amour
periwinkle clusters recede from
majestic entities climaxing into
the ocean of a deity's lachrymal reservoir.
celestial nativity
brings a new age of enlightenment
stars burst behind the eyes of an ingenue lady
captivated by your light otherworldly being
i am abstemious
lest i get drunk & lose my way with you
dominant archon
who beguiles my mind, orders my steps
as if you've known me a million sunrises
tastes my psuche
i am a cosmic siren
you're an ancient traveler
one of the great magi
who witnessed my miracles
while i stretched & yawned
after orgasmic creation
i thought i was alone in this constellation
until you crashed into my ethos
together we manifest divinity
a new race rises on the Eastern horizon
wild in nature i lose control
i feel your tyrannical pulse
tempted to submit so order
will be wrought from chaos
you've already entered my vahalla
deity of my lost memories
caress internal locks & set me free
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Re. Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
6th Jul 2017 8:09pm
Brenda.. brilliant collab.. you two knocked it out of the park.. love you...
Dave
Dave
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6th Jul 2017 10:53pm
Re. Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
Anonymous
6th Jul 2017 8:13pm
This breathes into the atrium of Elysian archives chiseled in labradorite tablets inked with the lifeforce of Diamond djinni's.
Thank you my E-la queen
Thank you my E-la queen
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Re: Re. Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
6th Jul 2017 10:57pm
thank you dearest Quiet one I was deeply honored to be invited to create with you.. I am over the moon with pleasure by how this came out.. love Crim
Re. Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
6th Jul 2017 8:17pm
Deep Underground, the final frontier. This is an exhilarating write from you both with the chemistry of compatible stars. A new constellation is born...;
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6th Jul 2017 11:01pm
Re. Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
Anonymous
6th Jul 2017 8:22pm
What a collaboration!
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6th Jul 2017 11:02pm
Re. Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
6th Jul 2017 10:28pm
Re: Re. Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
6th Jul 2017 11:03pm
thank you dearest Poet i'm deeply honored.. though no one shines like our Katja.. love you my friend.. love Brenda
Re. Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
6th Jul 2017 11:26pm
ohhhhh myyyyy
look at you two proto stars
colliding with such eloquence!
i love the inclusion of "psuche"
practically had a wordgasm right there
*gigglesnorts*
really can't say enough good things about this collab ...
.... it's like watching a world being born.
fine work from both of you
xo
look at you two proto stars
colliding with such eloquence!
i love the inclusion of "psuche"
practically had a wordgasm right there
*gigglesnorts*
really can't say enough good things about this collab ...
.... it's like watching a world being born.
fine work from both of you
xo
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Re: Re. Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
7th Jul 2017 00:09am
thank you graciously beautiful one from us both I am enamored with your poetic pen so you made my day with your comment.. love you lady.. xo Brenda
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2017 00:13am
Beautiful one, I can't tell where one takes over from the other. You merge so flawlessly. I feel like I just witnessed the birth of a star. Gorgeous, both of you.
So much love for you...
So much love for you...
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7th Jul 2017 00:39am
thank you graciously lovely one from us both you've gifted me with smiles today :) love you lady.. Crim
Re. Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
Anonymous
7th Jul 2017 5:09am
My Beautiful Brenda and Q, this stole breath from me as I read it...seamless and voices were as if one...outstanding job by the both of you!
I love you deeply, madly
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you deeply, madly
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
9th Jul 2017 3:45am
thank you my love from both of us for such a gracious comment.. I love you passionately.. Brenda
Re. Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
7th Jul 2017 2:49pm
it is always hard to get a collab to look and sound like it was written by one person. that seamless flow and single voice - this poem does it immaculately - I bow to your superior skills and talents :-)
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9th Jul 2017 3:45am
Re. Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
10th Jul 2017 9:10am
This is woven together like the finest of spun tapastry. Beautiful in a bone chilling kind of way. Love it
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10th Jul 2017 3:54pm
thank you most graciously from us both he is a pleasure to create with.. love Crim
Re. Even The Stars Weep~with QuietusQuill
13th Jul 2017 10:58am
this is quite wonderful, i love the interesting vocabulary. the first stanza drew me in immediately.
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