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From Hell to Breakfast
and flames to pancakes
is how I'll Love You
From the time it takes
syrup to pool on the edge
of the empty plate
Thick, heavy laden;
one engorged droplet
dangling
posed to stain
the linen
Before my tongue
catches it up
Leaving everything
pristine
Heavenly
content
~
is how I'll Love You
From the time it takes
syrup to pool on the edge
of the empty plate
Thick, heavy laden;
one engorged droplet
dangling
posed to stain
the linen
Before my tongue
catches it up
Leaving everything
pristine
Heavenly
content
~
Published 4th Jul 2017
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Anonymous
4th Jul 2017 1:19pm
If someone has a fire extinguisher handy, I need to be put out.
That was HOT.
That was HOT.
4th Jul 2017 2:46pm
and I thought the height of sensuality
at the breakfast table was undoing
the top button of my pyjama jacket ..
at the breakfast table was undoing
the top button of my pyjama jacket ..
4th Jul 2017 5:25pm
Oh my! - that was completely unexpected (lol) - I thoroughly enjoyed that :-)
4th Jul 2017 6:23pm
4th Jul 2017 7:16pm
i have an absolute heart-on for your poetry, vati
you turn the overlooked gestures, taken for granted moments & turn them into precious keepsakes.
loved this
xo
you turn the overlooked gestures, taken for granted moments & turn them into precious keepsakes.
loved this
xo
Anonymous
4th Jul 2017 9:37pm
*Ooh* ... :)
Anonymous
4th Jul 2017 9:54pm
so few words
so many mini implosions..
damn
just damn..
so many mini implosions..
damn
just damn..
Anonymous
5th Jul 2017 00:57am
lovely
5th Jul 2017 6:48pm
divine, this love ~origin, making and the content, and in the heavenly contentment. beautifully drawn <3 xx
7th Jul 2017 2:42pm
7th Jul 2017 6:38pm
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Oct 2021 2:45pm
7th Jan 2020 2:10pm
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7th Jan 2020 2:38pm
I've always been a fan breakfast in bed served with warm cinnamon buns and cold orange juice. But next time I think I'll order kinky pancakes instead.
7th Jan 2020 7:31pm
