a shadow soul no more

Eyes in the cave, my beautiful Dark Angel. Where once we took comfort in the darkness, once we move toward the light everything is sensitive. The sun can burn the eyes and the dark can make us uneasy. Standing in between is not an easy place to be with eyes open. And your eyes are definitely open, my lovely one. Such keen observations in this introspective piece. So much love...

thank you lovely one yes I spent so much time in the dark it was like a new born opening its eyes for the first time when I walked into the sun.. love you lady.. xo Crim

I'm loving this change taking place within  you, Brenda.  Very much so.
o.

thank you Jerry for embracing this write it came from my heart.. love you my friend.. xo Brenda

Last stanza sums it all up ! Great write !

thank you graciously dearest Ragnar.. love Crim

I thrilled that your night has lifted and storm clouds parted.  I'm still trying to tug free from my own darkness.  Your lines invigorate me, give me some hope.

thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow I realized I was tapping into negative energy & it was bringing me down.. I now know their is a positive beautiful energy for me to draw from.. I hope your darkness departs soon.. love Crim

Crim... I love this. You cannot let the darkness get you down. I am glad that you saw hope and the light of day. I could see you walking away from the shadows and darkness. The ending was quite perfect. We can all learn from this. It is quite inspiring.

thank you lovely Eswaller for such a heartfelt & beautiful comment.. I'm afraid it was my fault for connecting with the dark energy it didn't use to affect me.. something has changed & it does now.. I will do my best to connect with the light from now on.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts & visits..  love Crim

"so i learn a lesson    
& move on into the light    
where the sun shines on my soul    
 
casting out the shadows    
that choke my inner child    
who is brand new    
learning the language of love "
^^^^^^^^^^...this was the meat and potatoes of the poem. Rebirth, reborn.😘
Love it, Crim...

thank you beautiful Rain for the love you've shown me on this write.. love Brenda

Beautiful write… Ignites some hope in my bedarkened heart 🌹  

thank you graciously :) love Crimsin

.....ahhhh. tis' best to indulge! Days can only subside and transform. Not to be mistook for another thrill taken for granted.  

thank you I do indulge when needed ;) love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda...I know you have struggled with all which speaks to you...feeling torn and unsure of your direction...the line I loved most was of the lesson learned...one can exist within both realms as long as we understand why they are there for us to begin with...you understand from when and where both dark and light came to you and more importantly, the why. As long as you have this understanding, you can co-exist and each of them will show respect and reward you....I smile so very wide my love...

I love you madly....deeply....always and forever...

With all my love - Taryn xoxo

thank you my love for such a beautiful & deeply insightful comment.. illuminating my mind with your wisdom as you always do.. you have such a gift at doing that.. yes they do co-exist within me & I am this way for a purpose.. I need to remember that.. I deeply appreciate you reminding me.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda

Brenda.. the beauty of this, is that you embrace the change.. more towards the light, than the dark.. but between the two, is why i think you have so much balance.. you used to write a poem, either light or dark.. but i'm seeing a metamorphosis, a touch of both.. for the greater good of the art, and your being.. if that makes sense.. my sister i'm digging it.. and i'm proud of the journey, you're facing head on.. love you, always my sister..



















Dave

thank you Dave my brother you pointed out something I hadn't seen.. I did used to write either light or dark.. there is now both lacing their way through my writes.. what a beautiful revelation.. I love you my brother.. Brenda

you've learned to find a balance between the two.
macabre &beautiful kiss between the lines
shadows need light
love ya lady
xo

thank you beautiful one we poets walk precariously through both worlds love the way you see things :) love you lady.. Brenda

Crimbear you have stroked the curvature of a deitys smirk, no drift and sleep in the uprise of a celestial simper.

Powerful reflection of self worth. 🌹 Yeah your hypnotic

aw thank you dearest Quiet one i am deeply humbled & moved by your comment.. love Crim