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summer's wildflowers
i meditate on the wildflowers
free as the wind
drinking in the sun
decorating the hillsides
bringer of peace to my mind
if they can grow
among weed & rock
may it also be with me
bloom where planted
a wise man once said
i raise my sunflower face
let grace shine upon it
that i might grow nourishing seed
no longer a tare
in the wilderness
let my soul be gentle
as a cool summer breeze
refreshing to the souls it caresses
may i blossom among the brambles
bring beauty to the land
i meditate on the wildflowers
the heavens have kissed them
with morning dew
so it is with my being
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 30th Jun 2017
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Anonymous
30th Jun 2017 6:47pm
Such peace in this. Nice !!
30th Jun 2017 9:07pm
thank you dearest Ragnar that's what I sought while writing this poem.. love Crim
30th Jun 2017 6:54pm
Brenda, you penned this beautiful poem as though
you were outside among what you wrote about . . .
Yes, your sunflower face bloom with love and harmony.
you were outside among what you wrote about . . .
Yes, your sunflower face bloom with love and harmony.
30th Jun 2017 9:09pm
thank you dearest Jerry yes when I meditate on such a place I do indeed feel transported there.. happy that you felt the peace :) love you my friend.. Brenda
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30th Jun 2017 8:49pm
Big Zen Like
You meander between wild flowers and Lucifer's devil cock
Never boring my Brenda
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You meander between wild flowers and Lucifer's devil cock
Never boring my Brenda
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30th Jun 2017 9:11pm
thank you dearest Poet you gifted me big smiles with your comment :) yes I do go back & forth when the dark becomes too heavy I make back into the sunshine.. love you.. xx Brenda
30th Jun 2017 9:09pm
Such sweet and soothing lines! You make it so easy to visualize and maybe find some peace of mind. I'm kind of a hothead myself but I'm feeling cooler already. Thanks Crim!
30th Jun 2017 9:12pm
thank you Sir Crow I'm so happy you found this write soothing as this is what it did for me writing it :) love Crim
30th Jun 2017 9:59pm
God, those last two stanzas were the definition of perfect.
Always,
U.P.
Always,
U.P.
30th Jun 2017 10:27pm
thank you most graciously U.P. you brought me many smiles with your comment :) love Crim
Anonymous
30th Jun 2017 10:54pm
well done
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2017 2:59am
My Beautiful Brenda...wildflowers being my favorite this brought me smiles...I see you lie amongst them, as they wrap and cradle every curvature of your mind and soul, quietly planting seeds for you to feed and thrive on....in love with this ink as I am with you...
I love you my love
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you my love
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
1st Jul 2017 10:07am
thank you my love for such a beautiful comment.. it's like gentle rays of sun kissing my skin :) I love you passionately.. love Brenda
Anonymous
1st Jul 2017 3:05am
Brenda.. i've said it several times.. you are so brilliant, in your ability to go light or dark.. dig the peaceful breeze, of this delight.. love you..
Dave
Dave
1st Jul 2017 10:08am
thank you Dave I think those dappled with sun & shadows the most lovely.. I deeply appreciate you seeing that in me.. love you my brother.. Brenda
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1st Jul 2017 10:11am
thank you John I'm just a wildflower I'm happy you felt the breeze in this write.. love Crim
Anonymous
1st Jul 2017 3:37pm
Aww, you just took us on the most exhilarating walk, my beautiful Dark Angel. I really needed that breath of fresh air. Thank you so much for breathing beauty into my morning. So much love...
1st Jul 2017 4:13pm
thank you lovely one so happy this was a breath of fresh air for you as it was for me :) love you lady.. xo Crim
