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Childhood Distortion
Nothing said will awaken
The soul in midst of breaking
Compassion torn apart
Once affection is forsaken
Grow out of it child!
Pitching fits of silence
Interested far too much
In intimate violence
Scream, I'll comply
Awake at night I lie
Fighting the noise
On me I'll never rely.
The soul in midst of breaking
Compassion torn apart
Once affection is forsaken
Grow out of it child!
Pitching fits of silence
Interested far too much
In intimate violence
Scream, I'll comply
Awake at night I lie
Fighting the noise
On me I'll never rely.
Published 26th Jun 2017
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2017 4:44pm
Scars heal but never quite fade, the first two lines are so thoughtful, sometimes it takes a lot or at times very little to awaken the soul to fight back..everyone's breaking point is different i guess.
26th Jun 2017 5:48pm
That's very true, it seems everyone has a different breaking point for every harsh situation. I've reached mine a few times but bounced back. Thanks for stopping by, Vee, good to see you around again! ~anonshadow
28th Jun 2017 1:22am
I have gone through those challenges that almost breaks me, and bounced back too. These happenings taught me a lot, and made me a better person.:) I hope. Good read, anonshadow.
Yeah, I think sometimes we have to go through those times to grow into the person that we need to be to exceed. Thank you for the read, Grace. Always love to see stop by. ~anonshadow
