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Dominique
The gun thugs call her Dominique
Last woman standing every time
The hoods left bleeding in her wake
Their dead whores propped all in a row
He offers to buy her a drink
A Blood On the Water, with a twist
He lights the tip of her Gaulois
His final glib attempt at gallantry
Dominique shoves her hero to the bed
Straddles his hips and rides
Allowing him his sweet release
And knowing this will be his last
She leaves him cooling in the sack
Before maid service rumbles by
Not much like the open road
And nothing like this killer high.
Photo of Keira Knightley in "Domino"
Last woman standing every time
The hoods left bleeding in her wake
Their dead whores propped all in a row
He offers to buy her a drink
A Blood On the Water, with a twist
He lights the tip of her Gaulois
His final glib attempt at gallantry
Dominique shoves her hero to the bed
Straddles his hips and rides
Allowing him his sweet release
And knowing this will be his last
She leaves him cooling in the sack
Before maid service rumbles by
Not much like the open road
And nothing like this killer high.
Photo of Keira Knightley in "Domino"
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Re. Dominique
24th Jun 2017 5:52pm
Sir Crow I love these femme fatale stories
quite thrilling & sexy ;)
love Crim
quite thrilling & sexy ;)
love Crim
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27th Jun 2017 9:53pm
Re. Dominique
24th Jun 2017 6:45pm
The beautiful seductress--clever...hard-core....irresistible....leaving behind a trail of destruction and death!
Crow, my Friend...
I always find your tales of these dark, mysterious women so very fascinating. You have remarkable skill in this particular genre, and this piece is another exceptional example!
So enjoyed !! ( Perhaps you might consider creating further adventures for Ms Dominique??)
Crow, my Friend...
I always find your tales of these dark, mysterious women so very fascinating. You have remarkable skill in this particular genre, and this piece is another exceptional example!
So enjoyed !! ( Perhaps you might consider creating further adventures for Ms Dominique??)
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Re: Re. Dominique
27th Jun 2017 9:56pm
That's a possibility. A road trip with Dominique all the way to the sea, lots of seedy motels and seedier men. Sounds like fun to me....
Re. Dominique
24th Jun 2017 7:45pm
Forgive my potty mouth, but this brings new meaning to 'dead fuck'! 😅😅
Crow, that sinister, suspenseful and creative mind of yours....is so sexy!
Crow, that sinister, suspenseful and creative mind of yours....is so sexy!
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Re: Re. Dominique
27th Jun 2017 9:59pm
Glad you liked this Rain. I never heard that expression but it seems to apply. Dominique's a desperado.
Re. Dominique
25th Jun 2017 1:14am
This reminds me of a TV series but I can't for the life of me remember the name. But it has the name Dominique or Dominic and it was a western. Something about a woman and her son looking for her husband in the wild west. Hmm:) but I love your poem, Crowfly.
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Re: Re. Dominique
27th Jun 2017 10:07pm
That does sound familiar but I can't place it either. "Hell On Wheels" has a plucky heroine, but I think her hubby was killed by Indians at the start. She went on to become "a yellow rose" in demand by every dude in town. Great show if you haven't tried it. Thanks for the comment!
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Anonymous
25th Jun 2017 5:52pm
My Lovely Sir Crow, dark and gloomy wrapped in tempting and seductive...you always have such a way of reeling us into these mysterious tales...and I love them...I love you! With much love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. Dominique
27th Jun 2017 10:17pm
If I can reel you in I'm delighted. All the better if "Dominique" is fun to read in its darkling way. Maybe the killer high is catching. Love you too Lady Taryn!
Re. Dominique
28th Jun 2017 4:27am
Re. Dominique
8th Jul 2017 9:03pm
i've always wondered how to ditch a one night stand.
smooth story telling Mister
smooth story telling Mister
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