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Love-Power, Power of Love...
...It's cast pon a soul
so vast in it's hold
this thing called, love...
Oh for the want of it
an indefinable 'high' hit
a 'lightening jolt' from above...
May thee tarry on in vain
no more, awash in pain
many muddle, in search of
traversin' the earth's floor...
Aloof, aloft, in dreams
awake, a will to explore,
to seize that magical deity
most all will agree,
when within doth it begin...
Arrivin' like a gentle wind,
the healin' power of love...
Published 23rd Jun 2017
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23rd Jun 2017 1:51am
And it is a healing one, isn't it? That final couplet is like the white feathered balm that soothes the pain.
23rd Jun 2017 2:12am
I would have to agree my sweetness n I'm deeply grateful for your continued support of my ink. Appreciate you always :)
23rd Jun 2017 4:14am
Oh the power of love! It can be beautiful, amazing, even dangerous and hurtful. Its power......is powerful! Love this ink, suga!😗
23rd Jun 2017 4:34am
Thank you my sweet Rain, I'm honored n humbled by your words n support always :)
23rd Jun 2017 6:37am
There is so much power within love. I love the simplicity within this piece, yet it packs a punch. Has a smoothing effect too. Love it.
23rd Jun 2017 11:43am
Simple sometimes is the way to go... Although I'm aware love isn't simple at all! lol thank you my friend, I'm happy to have your continued support,n appreciate you much :)
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Jun 2017 6:53am
23rd Jun 2017 6:50am
smh, yes, something like that with more of a "what do you want?" overtone.. well who can actually say, when it takes
us on so many journies..
thank you for sharing a thing or two about love ;)
us on so many journies..
thank you for sharing a thing or two about love ;)
23rd Jun 2017 3:47pm
Such truth in your words my dear, n I thank you endlessly for your kindness n support always :)
23rd Jun 2017 7:55am
23rd Jun 2017 3:51pm
My Otha from anotha... thank you kid, truly n always honored to have your support n yes, may it never get away from us indeed... Much peace love to you n yours :)
23rd Jun 2017 6:11pm
The healing power of love.... You ain't neva lie.... I'm loving the rhythmic flow of this piece and the softness to it.... Nice....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
24th Jun 2017 10:44am
Well my smoothness I'd really like to say I haven't, but my mom would slap the taste out my mouth for doin so! Lol but Yea, I'm happy you liked this n I'm grateful as always for your support :) thank you
23rd Jun 2017 6:53pm
yes!
damn poe, you are a poetic powerhouse.
this is my first read in a few days & i'm just blown away by the depth
xo
damn poe, you are a poetic powerhouse.
this is my first read in a few days & i'm just blown away by the depth
xo
24th Jun 2017 10:46am
Aaaaawww Katja! Cmere n let me kiss that sweet Lil face of yours! :)...truly flattered n very thankful for all your support :)
Anonymous
24th Jun 2017 2:49pm
So many forms of it and every one beautiful...like this poem. Very nice, my friend
24th Jun 2017 6:47pm
Thank you for the very sweet commentary. I'm happy you liked n appreciate the support always :)
24th Jun 2017 3:40pm
24th Jun 2017 6:48pm
You a dear heart Lana n I'm sure you know it's power based on what you spill...thank you so much! Truly n always grateful for your support :)
Anonymous
27th Jun 2017 5:02am
It's the only thing that's universally understood and we need it like air and water, even if it hurts sometimes. Beautifully expressed PIKM :)
27th Jun 2017 10:20am
Yup yup we do indeed my dearest lady, long time since I last heard from you...happy to see your return, n thankful for your support as always :)
28th Jun 2017 4:38pm
It reads beautifully. Been always amazed by the words you use. I agree with that the power of love is like an indefinable 'high' hit', a 'lightening jolt' from above...
It's so powerful!!!
RoseJasmine
It's so powerful!!!
RoseJasmine
28th Jun 2017 6:22pm
