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bird
a sleep had set in me
indefinitively
when you were already
bargaining my extension
mistaking that last
spritely spurt I exuded
as was gotten crushed
beyond any thresholds
you couldn’t have stopped this
in all your gravity spread
will wait for you
in the beyondness
where dreams breathe
as words
Published 15th Jun 2017
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15th Jun 2017 4:12pm
15th Jun 2017 4:26pm
uma, the weight of this
presses on my lungs
making it impossible
to breathe.
xo
presses on my lungs
making it impossible
to breathe.
xo
15th Jun 2017 6:31pm
bird of the sky & the tree;
where she goes, she knows of sorrow.
wonderful...
where she goes, she knows of sorrow.
wonderful...
.....will wait for you
in the beyondness
where dreams breathe
as words"
Great and inspiring line
in the beyondness
where dreams breathe
as words"
Great and inspiring line
15th Jun 2017 8:59pm
This is so different for you, yet the gravity in these words are so profound Uma. A beautiful and as Katja say's, weighty piece. :) x
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15th Jun 2017 9:21pm
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21st Jun 2017 7:48pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition for July, '17. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
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Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side! Poet
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9685/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side! Poet
7th Jul 2017 11:26am
