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dry cunt
there is an emptiness
carnivorous in nature
that eats flesh from bone
crushes your soul
I reach for the darkness
to make me fight
it's been with me
as long as I can remember
my unholy faith
visceral rage
kept me alive
demons in operatic moans
scream within the silence
of my bereft soul
they feel my despair
echo my pain
I am left with a dull switch blade
to cut away the necrosis
that eats me alive
somewhere in the dark
my fierce face hides
left with vulnerability
tastes like ash on my tongue
I spit in disgust
where are my vodka days
why did this spirit depart?
left with limp dick words
that I masturbate
& fail to get off
a whore who has lost her touch
pimped out thoughts
like a pussy fucked dry
where is my poetic orgasm?
this cunt can't cum
her favored beast
is buried in another
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 13th Jun 2017
| Edited 14th Jun 2017
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Re. dry cunt
13th Jun 2017 5:42pm
in the immortal words of rammstein... muss jetzt zu den anderen pferden wollen auch geritten werden...
brenda this is raw fucking poetry at its best. your honesty rains down its blows without pulling punches.
this is why you're a favorite of mine.
xoxox
brenda this is raw fucking poetry at its best. your honesty rains down its blows without pulling punches.
this is why you're a favorite of mine.
xoxox
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thank you graciously beautiful one you made this moody cunt's week :)
I cherish your thoughts I google translated the German you are right..
must accept this truth..
by the way I love Rammstein..
here is one my favorite songs & videos by them
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W3q8Od5qJio
love you lady..
xo Brenda
I cherish your thoughts I google translated the German you are right..
must accept this truth..
by the way I love Rammstein..
here is one my favorite songs & videos by them
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W3q8Od5qJio
love you lady..
xo Brenda
Re: Re. dry cunt
13th Jun 2017 6:03pm
ohemgeeee! love du hast! its the first song the sadist and i danced to, ohne dich was our wedding song & my daughter was (given the timing of conception) conceived in the moshpit of their cape town concert lol :) love ya stacks xx
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13th Jun 2017 6:24pm
what a gorgeous love song beautiful one so fitting.. I looked up the English translation I don't speak any German though I am almost full blooded German with a dash Italian.. my family has been here too long & sadly we've lost our mother tongue.. thank you for sharing with me such cherished memories :) love you deeply lady.. xo Brenda
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Anonymous
13th Jun 2017 6:45pm
Beautiful Angel, your raw and unflinching print on the page is incredibly strong. I need your sharp edges to keep me focused. You are the blade I treasure for the beauty of the pain. You bring me perspectives I wouldn't be able to touch without your words. So much love...
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thank you lovely one for the beautifully moving & gracious comment.. giving me a new found perspective on my writes & with that brought me many smiles today :)
love you tons lady..
xo Crim
love you tons lady..
xo Crim
Re. dry cunt
I agree with shadoe, this is so honest and raw, nobody writes like you!
loves you sis
Zazzles xoxoxoxox
loves you sis
Zazzles xoxoxoxox
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Re: Re. dry cunt
13th Jun 2017 7:41pm
thank you graciously beautiful Jackie for such a wonderful comment :)
love you lady..
xo Brenda
love you lady..
xo Brenda
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Anonymous
13th Jun 2017 7:55pm
I am definitely a fan as well and this is freaking awesome !!!!
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13th Jun 2017 10:13pm
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13th Jun 2017 10:21pm
Hopefully her favored beast will come slouching back one day. I'm laying off the vodka too, listening to a little Rammstein now and then. Loved this Lady Crim!
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Re: Re. dry cunt
14th Jun 2017 11:50am
thank you Sir Crow yes hopefully my favored beast & muse will come back to me.. finally get me off ;) love Crim
Re. dry cunt
13th Jun 2017 10:32pm
My gawd! This is beautifully raw. The imagery in your words jumped off the page. Love it, Brenda! 😘
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14th Jun 2017 11:51am
Re. dry cunt
13th Jun 2017 11:53pm
Heh.Heh All that negativity I absolutely relate to. I have been down to the hurtin' so bad this poem could have been written by me, uh, except it would have to be written using words of the male sort, of course. I LOVED this write!
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Re: Re. dry cunt
14th Jun 2017 11:52am
thank you Jerry for relating so deeply & for such a beautiful comment.. love you my friend.. xo Brenda
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2017 2:06am
My Beautiful Brenda...I agree with my girls up there, raw and honest and inspiring as well...each word feeds us every time...never a limp dick in there...need I remind you how many times I've squeeeeeed over you?
I love you passionately my love!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you passionately my love!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. dry cunt
14th Jun 2017 11:54am
thank you my love you always bring me smiles with your comments :) I love you passionately.. xo Brenda
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14th Jun 2017 2:30am
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14th Jun 2017 11:54am
thank you dearest Poet feel free to use the title it would be my honor :) love you.. xo Brenda
Re. dry cunt
14th Jun 2017 2:53am
Captivated me from the title all the way to the end. Hard-hitting stuff
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14th Jun 2017 11:55am
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Anonymous
16th Jun 2017 2:42am
Brenda.. sometimes you just leave awe struck.. always in a good way.. love you..
Dave
Dave
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18th Jun 2017 7:40am