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Catch and Release
She comes in with the high night tide
Her tail flinging kelp and foam
He marvels as her scales drop
It seems high time to take her home
Her skin emits a gentle glow
That brightens slightly when caressed
She sings shanties when he slips inside
And both land and sea are truly blessed
He carries her back to the shore
And with reluctance grants her fair release
She swears by the deepest gods she will return
Her scales sapphire for a man of peace.
Her tail flinging kelp and foam
He marvels as her scales drop
It seems high time to take her home
Her skin emits a gentle glow
That brightens slightly when caressed
She sings shanties when he slips inside
And both land and sea are truly blessed
He carries her back to the shore
And with reluctance grants her fair release
She swears by the deepest gods she will return
Her scales sapphire for a man of peace.
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Re. Catch and Release
9th Jun 2017 7:55pm
I love the sexy mythical feel to this Sir Crow..
as well as the flow..
love Crim
as well as the flow..
love Crim
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9th Jun 2017 8:01pm
Re. Catch and Release
9th Jun 2017 8:22pm
My dear crowfly, you have a good idea how I feel about anything written about the sea... and of the Mer folk. Your write is sweet and sensual as is the undulating ocean current I love to feel caressing my body and my mind. x
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Re: Re. Catch and Release
9th Jun 2017 8:37pm
I'm so glad you enjoyed this Jade. Thank you! I think I hear a siren singing....
Re. Catch and Release
9th Jun 2017 10:37pm
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11th Jun 2017 7:58pm
Re. Catch and Release
9th Jun 2017 10:51pm
Sir Crow, this is quite a seductive, sweet, and a bit salty dream. This passage is my fav:
"She sings shanties when he slips inside
And both land and sea are truly blessed"
What like "Blow the Man Down." The second line is beautiful. Bravo!
"She sings shanties when he slips inside
And both land and sea are truly blessed"
What like "Blow the Man Down." The second line is beautiful. Bravo!
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Re: Re. Catch and Release
11th Jun 2017 8:01pm
Ha! "Blow the Man Down" would be a good pick, or "A Salty Dog" by Procol Harem. Thanks Gahdess!
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2017 2:59am
My Lovely Sir Crow, I absolutely loved the imagery I was able to see within these lines...and the tenderness between she and him...so very well done...I love you! With much love - Taryn xoxo

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Re: Re. Catch and Release
11th Jun 2017 8:03pm
I love the tenderness too after her flinging all that kelp and foam when she hit dry land. Thanks Taryn.
Re. Catch and Release
11th Jun 2017 1:45am
Thats the only way to go, Crowfly...catch and release. If they come back, they are yours...:) Good read.
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11th Jun 2017 8:04pm
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Re. Catch and Release
13th Jun 2017 9:50pm
tis a good thing this mermaid didn't have murder in her heart!
i like this dreamy, erotic write. well done.
my only quibble is that the rhythm is not consistent. i was going along reading, and was being pulled back and forth like the tide, but then a few lines don't exactly fit the beat and it's not as smooth as it could be.
i like this dreamy, erotic write. well done.
my only quibble is that the rhythm is not consistent. i was going along reading, and was being pulled back and forth like the tide, but then a few lines don't exactly fit the beat and it's not as smooth as it could be.
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