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fetish
are you drunk enough
for me tonight?
swagger up to me
& spit in my face
I know you want to
it's the whore in me
that brings out
the devil in you
with all your machismo
I feel the primal urges
that take over your pride
come to me when
I'm the only one
who can fill your need
snuff out your cigarette
on my facade
burn it down
until there is nothing left
except you, me & the sex
when all the proper ladies
fail to please
& you can't taste the pleasure of it
to fill your particular appetite
for female flesh
your fetish makes it demands
you must fulfill your end
if you want to cum
come to me at 2 am
bring your Sadistic darkness
I'll bring my filth
& I will feed your disease
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 2nd Jun 2017
| Edited 3rd Jun 2017
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Anonymous
3rd Jun 2017 8:22am
This literally has me salivating.
Delicious Crim.
Delicious Crim.
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3rd Jun 2017 2:36pm
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3rd Jun 2017 8:36am
This is what happens after all the proper ladies
are tucked safely in their beds.
If only they knew what they were missing.
Nice work, talented one...
are tucked safely in their beds.
If only they knew what they were missing.
Nice work, talented one...
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3rd Jun 2017 2:38pm
thank you most graciously for the smiles and gifting my page your presence and thoughts ;) love Crim
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3rd Jun 2017 11:50am
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3rd Jun 2017 2:39pm
thank you John you certainly have a way about you.. the thoughts that go through my head with just a comment ;) love Crim
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3rd Jun 2017 4:28pm
Such a deliciously dirty write, dear Crim
Damn, I need to get me some :-/
Love, Duende
Damn, I need to get me some :-/
Love, Duende
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3rd Jun 2017 5:18pm
thank you beautiful Duende such a smile you gave me with your comment :) love Brenda
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Anonymous
3rd Jun 2017 6:57pm
guuuuuuuuuuurl!
it goes without saying that i love this, practically slipping off my seat by the façade line ltm
i'm so with duende, gotta go poke the sadist now ;)
xoxoxo
it goes without saying that i love this, practically slipping off my seat by the façade line ltm
i'm so with duende, gotta go poke the sadist now ;)
xoxoxo
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3rd Jun 2017 7:41pm
thank you beautiful one you made my day with your response to this write.. so happy you enjoyed it :) love you lady.. xo Brenda
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Anonymous
3rd Jun 2017 10:41pm
Brenda.. darkened desire, luscious tongues lap up passion.. like rain drops, needing more.. don't know what that meant.. just had to respond.. love you...
Dave
Dave
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4th Jun 2017 2:57pm
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4th Jun 2017 1:45am
this is a fascinating write - it's sexy but disconcerting - I like it but I am not entirely sure why (lol)
ehugs on their way :-)
ehugs on their way :-)
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4th Jun 2017 2:58pm
thank you David I am happy this appealed to you even though you are not sure why :) love and hugs.. Brenda
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2017 2:06am
Mmmmmm ;)
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7th Jun 2017 10:43am
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2017 8:11pm
My Beautiful Brenda, it is no secret this caused thoughts to go through my head, thoughts I'm stiiiiiiill pondering and giggling about, ltm...loved this incredibly sexy and feisty ink!
I love you very much!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you very much!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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7th Jun 2017 10:44am
thank you my love so pleased it caused such thoughts to dance in your head makes me have thoughts of my own ;) I love you.. love Brenda
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2017 1:36pm
Holy cats, beautiful, you just set the page on fire here. You go get it, girl! Fierce and full of fire. Love it! Much love...
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7th Jun 2017 10:44am
thank you lovely one for such an awesome comment bringing me smiles :) love Crim
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