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See me World
Young and old defines my soul
Black and bold my history shows
Its like you already know me just not my name
Such is fates twisted little game, but I still choose to put my heart on display
Sign sealed delivered, weeks later returns to sender
Thought I would set the world on fire,
But you can’t even see my smoke signals
I’m just another one of America’s hidden figures
Still scared of my deepest fear, of my greatness beyond measure
My real fear is to show you my dominance and you not accept my prominence
For you to reject it, neglect it, totally disrespect it
So I make time to write simple lines that may rhyme but often
My style is no style, untraditional, unrehearsed, unorthodox since birth
I’m just asking to be received; I’m just wanting to be believed
See me world as I see me
Imperfect…but with the potential to be
Black and bold my history shows
Its like you already know me just not my name
Such is fates twisted little game, but I still choose to put my heart on display
Sign sealed delivered, weeks later returns to sender
Thought I would set the world on fire,
But you can’t even see my smoke signals
I’m just another one of America’s hidden figures
Still scared of my deepest fear, of my greatness beyond measure
My real fear is to show you my dominance and you not accept my prominence
For you to reject it, neglect it, totally disrespect it
So I make time to write simple lines that may rhyme but often
My style is no style, untraditional, unrehearsed, unorthodox since birth
I’m just asking to be received; I’m just wanting to be believed
See me world as I see me
Imperfect…but with the potential to be
Written by
FreeLove87
(SamuraiEde)
Published 1st Jun 2017
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Re. See me World
1st Jun 2017 3:14pm
I see you bro. I truly do n I must say what you said n how you said it is very much like how I feel n think...excellent, mind matter...
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Re: Re. See me World
2nd Jun 2017 4:10am
I appreciate it bro, I think all people would like more understanding from the world, of who we are and what we want..much love
Re. See me World
For the world to see such grief in denial they shall never be needed, for that pain to recover could never take longer. For that to be shown is a curse in costume. A hidden meaning in a signal is nothing more to nature than a skit in a play on preview. A joke we've all seen, a role we can all play, a purpose to install and for what reason?
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Re: Re. See me World
2nd Jun 2017 7:24am
heavy...mind blowing tragic that the world may never know and probably will never care, most of us will walk paths that will forever go unseen...
Re. See me World
2nd Jun 2017 6:34am
Great write! Those first two lines immediately grab the attention...
The poem itself is interesting and deeply felt... those last two lines sealed it perfectly!
Awesomeness!
The poem itself is interesting and deeply felt... those last two lines sealed it perfectly!
Awesomeness!
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Re. See me World
thank you so much i think most good writes grab you at once
appreciate you diving into parts of the depths and receiving me
appreciate you diving into parts of the depths and receiving me
Re. See me World
Definitely "potential to be" with writes like this.
We're all so privy to our own potential. If only the world could see everything we know about ourselves. Writing puts it out there. Keep doing it, Free.
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We're all so privy to our own potential. If only the world could see everything we know about ourselves. Writing puts it out there. Keep doing it, Free.
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Re: Re. See me World
10th Jun 2017 1:06pm
yes if only, but we gotta get over ourselves first sometimes and have the courage to show ourselves if we want to be seen... lets go for it thanks for the read
Re. See me World
13th Jun 2017 1:05pm
Very different vibe/write from you. Almost as if it comes from a hidden vulnerability. So intense and personal yet very relatable. The world can only see what we show them....and our imperfections are definitely so much better than perfection when the right time embraces them, that it's a shame when the world doesn't see them. Loved this.
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Re: Re. See me World
14th Jun 2017 4:35am
its all the same on the inside, just different vibes pour out on different days but the world is very selective and its effected by so many now that the natural order of things can scare us from letting our light be shown. then when we've final gotten pass that fear it presents more obstruction its a battle thanks for reading
Re. See me World
Anonymous
29th Jun 2017 11:49am
you are seen, i see you
no need to please or surprise them,
and ehat i've learned it feels more better and deeper
to shock "self" when putting any POTENTIAL energy
into motion.. putting your truth to use
Bravo!
no need to please or surprise them,
and ehat i've learned it feels more better and deeper
to shock "self" when putting any POTENTIAL energy
into motion.. putting your truth to use
Bravo!
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Re: Re. See me World
30th Jun 2017 10:15pm
" putting your truth to use" i like that definitely gotta appreciate within before there will be any appreciation out... thanks for reading
Re. See me World
6th Sep 2017 9:34am
Love, love, love your imperfection ... powerful lines from the heart. True authenticity!
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6th Sep 2017 9:39am