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all humans are fragile
there is no soulmate
for people are never
what they appear[ed]
takes a while
to sink in
people believe a fake
and disbelieve what's there
such is the human kind
i believe
or rather i should say
have come to believe
staying true to ya principles
both covert
and overt
not easy
love, you have many a talents
and your beauty is not a common one too
sweetheart you are not the one though
for you don't believe your reality
calling me a do-gooder hypocrite
that didn't hurt me
what did
was when you wouldn't believe
i'll be the same behind as i was
in front
of you and everbody else
and yes all humans are fragile
just that some
have glued their shards
too tight to break up
for people are never
what they appear[ed]
takes a while
to sink in
people believe a fake
and disbelieve what's there
such is the human kind
i believe
or rather i should say
have come to believe
staying true to ya principles
both covert
and overt
not easy
love, you have many a talents
and your beauty is not a common one too
sweetheart you are not the one though
for you don't believe your reality
calling me a do-gooder hypocrite
that didn't hurt me
what did
was when you wouldn't believe
i'll be the same behind as i was
in front
of you and everbody else
and yes all humans are fragile
just that some
have glued their shards
too tight to break up
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Re. all human are fragile
23rd May 2017 7:20pm
Walker this is a for real write from your heart.. that ending really got to me..
powerful..
love Crimsin
powerful..
love Crimsin
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Re. all human are fragile
23rd May 2017 8:08pm
Good write the begining had me twisted but definitely liked the ending. Thanks
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Re: Re. all human are fragile
24th May 2017 3:01pm
i promise i didn' write it wantonly cryptic sistah AEmelia. luv ya. happy ya enjoyed. :-)
Re. all human are fragile
23rd May 2017 9:43pm
okay....but y'needn't be so obvious.....but
over-obviousity
is what gets the accolades'round here------?so waddu i know?
write on, kid
over-obviousity
is what gets the accolades'round here------?so waddu i know?
write on, kid
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Re: Re. all human are fragile
24th May 2017 3:03pm
abso-bloody-lutely spot on dadda. over-obviousity is in voge ya know. and ya know what many don know and sayin that is a big no -know luva ya dadda kozak
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