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Full Throttle
I want you to know me
though I'm a romantic lass
not your taste
I'm the kind of woman
you keep a distance from
the type that would
sink her teeth into you
try to domesticate
the beast in you
keep it full throttle
stay away from the likes of me
I would ride you hard
know you would
give me the same
for just a night
wish that would be enough for me
to taste the wild in you
just once
savor your raw bloody meat
served cold on the page
know you burn hot
feel your heat
no this isn't a love letter
just straight up talk
telling it like it is
your poetics
makes me think
of the unobtainable
I am left in the dust
sated by your fuck you poetry
left wanting more
as you drive away
take a stiff drink
without a look back
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Re. No Looking Back
Anonymous
20th May 2017 1:07am
Brenda.. simply a lucky person to be described by your gifted words.. loved this, and you..
Dave
Dave
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Re. No Looking Back
20th May 2017 1:22am
this too hard jack-ass need be kicked hard, for ignoring a lass like ya crimsin. oh how heartful ya write..always
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20th May 2017 1:34am
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Re: Re. Full Throttle
20th May 2017 2:11am
thank you Todski for your keen editing eyes I have a bad habit of repeating myself I edited.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts.. love Brenda
Re. Full Throttle
Anonymous
20th May 2017 4:18am
My Beautiful Brenda...word play in writes can be so enjoyable and in this ink it certainly is...loved that last stanza my love...this brought me a smile...go get em!
I love you so much!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you so much!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. Full Throttle
20th May 2017 5:14am
thank you my love yes this was meant to be playful fun ;) I cherish and love you.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts on this.. love Brenda
Re. Full Throttle
20th May 2017 1:13pm
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20th May 2017 1:58pm
thank you dearest Poet truth is I wouldn't want a man I could tame prefer them wild & primal.. love Brenda
Re. Full Throttle
20th May 2017 8:00pm
Fine and hard-edged lines Lady Crim. He leaves you at his own peril, little knowing that there will be Hell to pay.
I'm the kind of woman
you keep a distance from
the type that would
sink her teeth into you
try to domesticate
the beast in you
Might be more of an invitation than a warning to some, at least a challenge. I'll bet you've domesticated more than your share....
I'm the kind of woman
you keep a distance from
the type that would
sink her teeth into you
try to domesticate
the beast in you
Might be more of an invitation than a warning to some, at least a challenge. I'll bet you've domesticated more than your share....
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Re: Re. Full Throttle
21st May 2017 5:37pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow you always make me smile with your comments :) love Crim
Re. Full Throttle
22nd May 2017 7:57pm
Crim my darling, you never disappoint the reader
I adore you :)
love you sis always...
Jackie xoxoxo
I adore you :)
love you sis always...
Jackie xoxoxo
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23rd May 2017 5:07am
Re. Full Throttle
24th May 2017 11:44pm
beautifully written at full throttle - got my motor running :-)
great stuff :-)
great stuff :-)
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25th May 2017 00:20am