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the beauty of demons
go home sweet demons
to your place of rest
in the homes I've given you
I've set you free through the screen
I'm not needed anymore
once we were
& knew each other
was a painful time
each of you in a rage
in time we learned respect
for one another
insane ones
fury that came from fear
I called you each by name
learned the beauty
of your ancient tongue
you used to appear to me
in vicious guise
caused me to tremble inside
now I see your gentle faces
little ones I called you
each came to recognize my kind nature
you told me your fears
I released you into the atmosphere
we had so many great times
though I admit to the pain
I felt when you first approached
pressed in on me
with soul rape intent
those days are behind us
I learned to love your ways
gave you freedom on the page
you gave me greatness
it was you they loved
my legion, my lovers
march into the night
know I still hear you
I have faith that each
will see the gates
be given new names
it was fate we crossed paths
Lord Lucifer let them fear no more
tyranny is not the way
to make them obey
love them as a Father would
they are our children
watch over them
groom them for greatness
in my mind's eye
they are & always will be
my little ones
I love them like a mother would
be free children
tonight I write for you
you gave me voice
when I had none
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 20th May 2017
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20th May 2017 11:46am
thank you lovely Amelia could be I was their captive so long that I don't see them as the beasts they are anymore at any rate they are gone.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts.. love Crim
20th May 2017 1:02pm
21st May 2017 5:32pm
20th May 2017 4:10pm
legion of the wicked sheltered in a poem;
it's a poem of benevolence, Crim...
it's a poem of benevolence, Crim...
21st May 2017 5:32pm
20th May 2017 5:12pm
Brenda.. such a powerful ink.. i always feel the wisdom you share with us, the readers who dig you.. excellent work my Queen.. love you..
Dave
Dave
21st May 2017 5:34pm
20th May 2017 7:45pm
Demons can be a gas but they're not worth the destruction. I'd stick with the angels. I find they're not always so sweet as one might expect. They do know how to have a good time.
21st May 2017 5:33pm
thank you Sir Crow you're right I had a dreadful dream where they were very cruel to me.. love Crim
Anonymous
20th May 2017 9:06pm
this has an amazing sense of freedom & acceptance of self, even the ugliest bits of what makes us who we are.
loved it more than words can say, beautiful brenda
x's & o's
loved it more than words can say, beautiful brenda
x's & o's
21st May 2017 5:35pm
thank you beautiful one for such a beautiful comment on this write I loved it :) love Brenda
21st May 2017 6:16am
Oh, dear Crim... how you moved me with this write!
To see our demons as little ones, as children who need to be heard and set free... wow!
So much wisdom in your words... thank you for sharing!
Love, Duende
To see our demons as little ones, as children who need to be heard and set free... wow!
So much wisdom in your words... thank you for sharing!
Love, Duende
21st May 2017 5:36pm
thank you lovely Duende yes though they have been a part of me it's time I let them go as someone once told me.. love Brenda
Anonymous
22nd May 2017 3:27pm
Such a beautiful embracing of your demons. Embrace and release. You are loving soul, my lovely dark angel
23rd May 2017 5:05am
thank you lovely one a great love I have for them even when they like to play tricks on me & scare me :) love Crim
23rd May 2017 5:16am
It does seem that what was once thought monsterous has become lovely. I admit I love my own. Excellent ink, Lady Crim.
23rd May 2017 11:47am
thank you my Darkest Lord I did think them ghastly creatures when I first met them then I saw they had feelings & felt fear, had a language of their own.. I then came to love them.. love Crim
24th May 2017 11:50pm
the whole poem is a fascinating twist of the normal - whatever normal is - the subject matter seemed alien to me but I still got it and it made me think about my own demons - we all have them right?
excellent write Brenda :-)
excellent write Brenda :-)
25th May 2017 00:19am
thank you David yes in a way we all do have our own personal demons that we covet and in time must be set free so we ourselves can have peace.. lot of love for you :) love Brenda
Anonymous
25th May 2017 3:32am
My Beautiful Brenda, our demons come in many shapes and forms and they are created and linger for their warranted reasons...when they are able to be freed, they let us know....your demons will always be a part of you and speak to you when needed...for now they just may need to sleep...
I love you so very much!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you so very much!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
25th May 2017 11:06am
thank you my love yes our demons come & stay for awhile in my case for many years they had become a deep part of me either they are slumbering or have departed.. in any case they will be missed.. I love you for understanding.. xo Brenda
