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for the love of books & poetry
I slept with my old books
curled up with them
the smell of them
transporting me
to the days I could get lost in them
I am locked out these days
they no longer open
their hidden doors to me
secret places
where I slipped in
became the heroine
in the world of words
Narnia is no more for me
though I know Aslan
still takes care of me
he is kept safe in my memory
of the place
a safe one
for a child who lived in a tree
was always afraid
while wars waged at home
tucked inside the pages
I was at peace
I read of children
escaping to the forest
who ate wild berries to survive
drank milk from obliging goats
inside my tree house fortress
I had run away with them
in the Secret Garden
I was shaded from life's pain
I had the key
one day it was stolen from me
then a shiny new one replaced it
poetry a place to live & die
here I am
& always will remain
if you want to know me
I'm hidden safely within the page
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Re. for the love of books & poetry
19th May 2017 3:19am
Books. One of my greatest loves along with music and poetry...With any of these, my life would be totally different and thats not necessarily a good thing. In fact the thought scares me. Love <3
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Re: Re. for the love of books & poetry
19th May 2017 3:44am
thank you Mysterious One books, music and poetry are a great comfort indeed.. I cherish your support dear one.. love Crim
Re. for the love of books & poetry
19th May 2017 3:24am
I love this, Crim. Well done. No matter how bad the day seems we can always find solace in the pages of a good book.
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Re: Re. for the love of books & poetry
19th May 2017 3:46am
thank you graciously Darkest Lord yes we can always escape into different landscapes in our beloved books :) love Crim
Re. for the love of books & poetry
19th May 2017 8:10am
So beautiful, Crim, that place we escape to when we read. These things keep us strong and when the story ends, we write our own.
I've strayed from such things in the past only to return. My life was much more empty without them and I won't make that mistake again. Maybe it's in our blood?
Thank you for this enjoyable read...
I've strayed from such things in the past only to return. My life was much more empty without them and I won't make that mistake again. Maybe it's in our blood?
Thank you for this enjoyable read...
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Re: Re. for the love of books & poetry
19th May 2017 9:07am
thank you lovely Kasai I will be able to return one day just some concentration issues at the present but you're right poetry is currently open for me so I write my own story perfectly put dear one :) love Crim
Re. for the love of books & poetry
"if you want to know me
I'm hidden safely within the page" > such beauty in these lines!
"secret places
where I slipped in
became the heroine > now thàt's clever!!! (pen bow)
in the world of words"
Loved this poem, dear Crim
Love, Duende
I'm hidden safely within the page" > such beauty in these lines!
"secret places
where I slipped in
became the heroine > now thàt's clever!!! (pen bow)
in the world of words"
Loved this poem, dear Crim
Love, Duende
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Re: Re. for the love of books & poetry
19th May 2017 9:09am
thank you graciously beautiful Duende you highlighted part of my favored lines in this write.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts dear lady.. love Brenda
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Anonymous
19th May 2017 9:07am
This is such an amazing write to me.....very heartfelt and open I can identify with it a great deal, I use poetry and music and books to escape life and kerb my loneliness and sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't...this however highlights this beautifully.
Great write
Ben
Great write
Ben
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Re: Re. for the love of books & poetry
19th May 2017 9:12am
thank you dearest Ben when I was young books gave me landscapes to escape to now poetry & music does that for me.. one day I hope the secret passages in books opens to me again I love them with a passion.. love Brenda
Re. for the love of books & poetry
19th May 2017 12:53pm
lucidly portrayed, Crim;
I can see the lion & the witch in the wardrobe...
I can see the lion & the witch in the wardrobe...
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19th May 2017 5:56pm
Re. for the love of books & poetry
Anonymous
19th May 2017 1:56pm
Dearest dark angel, you stole a piece of my heart with this beautiful write. How deeply I relate to this piece. Another life, another world, an escape from reality...perhaps a chance to recharge to head back in for another round in the fray of life. Beautifully done!
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Re: Re. for the love of books & poetry
19th May 2017 5:58pm
thank you most graciously lovely one yes I think it is time I currently have some new books to read :) love Crim
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Re. for the love of books & poetry
19th May 2017 7:03pm
You found fantasy and escape in books as a child, but now you make your own contributions to alternative worlds. You create a few of your own Lady Crim, some dark, some light, but always fascinating...
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Re: Re. for the love of books & poetry
19th May 2017 10:49pm
thank you Sir Crow books have may have closed their doors for the moment but poetry is open to me & for that I'm grateful.. happy to know I create landscapes you can lose yourself in.. love Crim
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Anonymous
19th May 2017 7:08pm
My Beautiful Brenda, so blessed I am to have gotten to know you through the inked pages you have shared with us here...that was the gateway to "us"...I am grateful they provide you the escape which is needed...loved this...I could smell the books in each and every word...
I love you my love!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you my love!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. for the love of books & poetry
19th May 2017 10:51pm
thank you my love & I am grateful as well if my nose was still stuck only in my books I never would have known you poetry has open many doors for which I am so happy for.. I love you deeply.. xo Brenda
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Anonymous
20th May 2017 1:02am
Brenda.. truly beautiful.. love your softer side.. and am amazed by you..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. for the love of books & poetry
20th May 2017 1:53am
thank you Dave for loving this soft side of me.. love you my brother.. xo Brenda