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The Perfect Girl
perfection needs more than appearance
the girl I want is layered in beauty
you can keep those delusional, snobby bitches
for those narcissistic dicks
sexy to me isn’t a breadstick
I want a woman with some sexy curves
strikes me with her mind
has my heart racing with just her sight
that's my kind of perfection
I'm not afraid of personal issues
it takes time to heal scars
I want a girl who heals me as I heal her
two fucked up individuals
we'll take comfort in each other arms
find some common ground
not just about the sex
rather it be about craving each other's company
I want a girl that when she talks I hear a friend and a lover
not just a dirty little fling
we can touch up on world views
right before fucking like animals
getting turned on by her body, always
imperfections are perfection to me
never was one for airheads anyway
they only agree like they have no brains
the girl I want is fly as fuck, and she knows it
even when others roll their eyes
the girl I want is layered in beauty
you can keep those delusional, snobby bitches
for those narcissistic dicks
sexy to me isn’t a breadstick
I want a woman with some sexy curves
strikes me with her mind
has my heart racing with just her sight
that's my kind of perfection
I'm not afraid of personal issues
it takes time to heal scars
I want a girl who heals me as I heal her
two fucked up individuals
we'll take comfort in each other arms
find some common ground
not just about the sex
rather it be about craving each other's company
I want a girl that when she talks I hear a friend and a lover
not just a dirty little fling
we can touch up on world views
right before fucking like animals
getting turned on by her body, always
imperfections are perfection to me
never was one for airheads anyway
they only agree like they have no brains
the girl I want is fly as fuck, and she knows it
even when others roll their eyes
Published 10th May 2017
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10th May 2017 1:47pm
DC you have a beautiful mind and it is evident in your writes a sexy lady with curves that you adore hell yeah!!!
sexy, loving ink..
love Crim
sexy, loving ink..
love Crim
Anonymous
10th May 2017 2:11pm
Were all men like you in their thinking there would be a lot less hurting women out there, I believe. Loved this piece. Good on you!
10th May 2017 2:37pm
11th May 2017 8:03pm
12th May 2017 6:22am
Great to see you're writing/posting again!
Beautiful poem... it's good to know some men aren't afraid of personal issues and look further than appearance, but breadstick? You know how I feel about skinny shaming... shame on you ;-)
Beautiful poem... it's good to know some men aren't afraid of personal issues and look further than appearance, but breadstick? You know how I feel about skinny shaming... shame on you ;-)
12th May 2017 7:19am
Haha... I love skinny girls too. I just don't believe girls should feel the need to starve themselves. Beauty is not just what the media tells us it is. There is beauty and sexiness in us all. Not that I don't believe in staying healthy. But healthy is not about being skinny or fat. Not meaning to shame anyone. It's just about what I see. Like girls who think they are so much better just because they're skinny. I wanted a poem to show that curves are just as sexy. To me at least... hehe 😁
12th May 2017 11:48am
Oh, the smiles you brought me with your ethical answer ;-)
I know you good enough to know that you weren't shaming anyone, but I needed to protect my tribe (lol) (I'm too curvy to be a breadstick, but still...)
"There is beauty and sexiness in us all" > and so it is!
I know you good enough to know that you weren't shaming anyone, but I needed to protect my tribe (lol) (I'm too curvy to be a breadstick, but still...)
"There is beauty and sexiness in us all" > and so it is!
17th May 2017 7:06pm
21st May 2017 7:54am
It's been way too long. I used to love talking with you and reading your poems. You always seemed so upbeat 😁. If you come back around, message me and let me know how you been 🤗 Big hugs
20th Aug 2017 1:39am
Yeah you tell them, time to get real, bimbos everywhere, gossip tools, I know where you are coming from I'm a girl and I can't find a good friend nowhere but sometimes I'm surrounded by the real thing snd that should be the cods always. Loved it, have a browse on my shit too if you want, you might like it. I'll catch up with you soon, bye!
9th Jan 2018 10:10am
Indeed perfection is in the flaws because flaws reveal authenticity! Love the willingness to embrace personal issues and the knowing that true beauty exists beyond appearance. Always fantastic to see this rare perspective from a male. It's so refreshing. Thank you! Excellent poem.
