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You're Free To Dance
In a conversation
of freedom and
open mindedness
The analogy of dancing
naked in the rain
is anchor to discussions
It's interesting
that water droplets
falling on undressed skin
(when an umbrella could protect us)
is the mental theater
associated with
being un-shackled
de-chained
removed from slavery
The human race has fought
freedom of sex
since Adam was led
tempted by the temptress
to bite an apple
There comes a time
when you've fought
for freedoms
repetitively;
read on the topic
that you realize
sex is just art
(especially, when done right)
dance is an art
and it's an art
whether you're dressed
on the pole
or not
When information collides
we realize people
are an art
with all their colorful
choice of characters
values and personas
We realize a simple update
comment
poem
story
song
drawing
or even graffiti
is art
ALL ART
is a voice of reason
all reason
should be free
to exist, as freely as
every thought
that crossed your mind
as my words
entered your mental theater
of conscious
theory
I'd fight for rights
of thought
you should fight
for the right
to
art
-x-
Written by
RevolutionAL
(Alistair Plint)
Published 10th May 2017
| Edited 25th May 2018
Author's Note
Dedicated to all artists and creatives.
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Re. You're Free To Dance
Anonymous
10th May 2017 12:13pm
Whenever I feel the Iron Fist of the Webmiss clamping down on the nads of my Freedom, I strip off my tidey whiteys and run around the front yard shaking my junk.
It's all art - except for Art, who lost his arms and legs in a tragic combine accident. He was mistakenly stuffed in a mail box and we now call him Bill.
It's all art - except for Art, who lost his arms and legs in a tragic combine accident. He was mistakenly stuffed in a mail box and we now call him Bill.
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Re: Re. You're Free To Dance
Aah see now your junk spinning around like a helicopter blade in the mirror of rightfulness, just scared the living shit outta me. That was some wicked mental theater right there.
bwaaah!
Thank you for edit, Mr Blaze, you are indeed correct, Apple is her name and apple is a fruit, though I'm not sure that Apple aint a fruit too. bwaah!
However the my heart breaks for Art, who should have had the freedom of housing himself in a mailbox. That combine needs to adjust it's attitude possibly. There are enough Bill's in the month!
Thank you for the humor and comment!
Valued
Al
bwaaah!
Thank you for edit, Mr Blaze, you are indeed correct, Apple is her name and apple is a fruit, though I'm not sure that Apple aint a fruit too. bwaah!
However the my heart breaks for Art, who should have had the freedom of housing himself in a mailbox. That combine needs to adjust it's attitude possibly. There are enough Bill's in the month!
Thank you for the humor and comment!
Valued
Al
Re. You're Free To Dance
10th May 2017 12:31pm
Bravo!!
"There comes a time that
you realize that
ALL ART
is a voice of reason
and all reason
should be free
to exist
as freely
as every thought
that crossed your mind
as my words
entered your mental theater
of conscious
theory"
That's like the sun rising, Al!
"There comes a time that
you realize that
ALL ART
is a voice of reason
and all reason
should be free
to exist
as freely
as every thought
that crossed your mind
as my words
entered your mental theater
of conscious
theory"
That's like the sun rising, Al!
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Re: Re. You're Free To Dance
10th May 2017 1:30pm
I do love a decent sunrise Avaharti Thank you for your kindness, visit and comment.
Special
Al
Special
Al
Re. You're Free To Dance
10th May 2017 12:31pm
AL well said all poetry is art in some manor may not appeal to everyone but there is beauty in all expression it that it reflects talent & soul of the artist.. you shine my friend..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Re: Re. You're Free To Dance
10th May 2017 1:32pm
"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder" We have no rights to judge the art of others, or the spill of paint, ink, digital digits that it takes to create the beauty. loved Al
Re. You're Free To Dance
10th May 2017 3:02pm
"Express yourself" (Madonna, 1989) and "the devil take the hindmost" (Beaumont & Fletcher, 1611) - a nice combination - but is it viable?
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Re: Re. You're Free To Dance
10th May 2017 3:11pm
Josh, anything in the world is viable if you believe it, to be so ;) Thank you for reading me, kind of you Al
Re. You're Free To Dance
11th May 2017 00:12am
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11th May 2017 9:33am
Re. You're Free To Dance
11th May 2017 2:47am
This passage is beautiful "you realize
that sex is just an art." It elevates sensuality to it's well deserved place among the masters. I get so tired of sex being equated with filth or sin. It is one of the most awesome artforms given to humankind when given the respect it deserves.
that sex is just an art." It elevates sensuality to it's well deserved place among the masters. I get so tired of sex being equated with filth or sin. It is one of the most awesome artforms given to humankind when given the respect it deserves.
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Re: Re. You're Free To Dance
11th May 2017 11:22am
Thank you for seeing the beauty I'm trying to relate Thank you for reading and commentating on my passion. Have an awesome day! Al
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11th May 2017 10:57am
Re. You're Free To Dance
Anonymous
6th Nov 2017 7:03am
It has been waaaayyy too long since Ive visited you, and when
reading this one.. i realise how much youre missed.
because i want to hug this landscape of words.
So lovely
reading this one.. i realise how much youre missed.
because i want to hug this landscape of words.
So lovely
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Re. You're Free To Dance
15th Apr 2018 7:17pm
You've warned yourself of the numerous conflicts that plague our society. It's true that art, as a way of expressing beauty and the artist's thoughts, is often attacked because certain people don't like the message. You urge both versions of yourself to fight for different causes that lead to the same result.
Thanks for participating in my competition!
Thanks for participating in my competition!
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