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-cosmic bohemian
most nights you would never guess
she's afraid of the dark
for her drifting heart only lingers
in a sky full of stars
she knows not where to mingle
when Jupiter shines so bright;
to remember the child in days;
how the mirror was less opaque
and once-upon-a-time stories
made it harder to say goodbye....
-ed
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7th May 2017 9:11am
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7th May 2017 10:50am
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7th May 2017 3:35pm
so beautiful to behold Ed is your love and thoughts on this person..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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I'm humbled by your kind words, but there's definitely no love involved, hah. I barely know her and it's just something I was suddenly inspired to write...
Thanks for reading... :)
Thanks for reading... :)
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7th May 2017 3:40pm
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7th May 2017 3:41pm
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8th May 2017 2:17am
Beautiful Write Good Sir!!!
This had that perfect dash of magic combined with excellent flow!!!
This had that perfect dash of magic combined with excellent flow!!!
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9th May 2017 1:10am
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8th May 2017 3:09am
The title immediately intrigued me... it really suits the poem!
Beautiful write... love those last two lines and the ethereal feel in this one...
Beautiful write... love those last two lines and the ethereal feel in this one...
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9th May 2017 1:10am
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Anonymous
8th May 2017 3:45pm
Fenom!!
ugm, im sure you do not mind me cradling this one close.
so beautiful, so fulfilling in all of its glorious melancholy
ugm, im sure you do not mind me cradling this one close.
so beautiful, so fulfilling in all of its glorious melancholy
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9th May 2017 1:10am
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It is sad when we can't return to the days of our childhood memories, or grow accustomed to the dark that enables us, as the stars, to shine.
Good to see you posting again, Ed.
Good to see you posting again, Ed.
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9th May 2017 00:17am
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Jun 2018 9:45pm
5th Aug 2017 00:23am
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