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-under the cloud coverage (with Michelle)
could you hear my heart's whisper
like bare feet sneaking through grass
the faint touch of lost fingers
on your back, how they lingered
in the warmth of my embrace
trying to make you feel safe
and fall asleep in my arms...
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like bare feet sneaking through grass
the faint touch of lost fingers
on your back, how they lingered
in the warmth of my embrace
trying to make you feel safe
and fall asleep in my arms...
-ed
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Re: Re. -under the cloud coverage (with Michelle)
19th Jul 2017 1:23am
Thanks old friend. I'm nervous to send it to her, so thanks for the kind words...
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19th Jul 2017 6:53pm
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19th Jul 2017 6:02pm
the faint touch of lost fingers
on your back,
^^^^^
was a mind numbingly gorgeous image.
the entirety was, obviously lovely, but that line speaks of soft affection, newness, tentativeness
ugh rambling here
but seriously stunning writing, hun.
also, it's really good to see you writing again ya knowt.
love ya & such stuff
xo
on your back,
^^^^^
was a mind numbingly gorgeous image.
the entirety was, obviously lovely, but that line speaks of soft affection, newness, tentativeness
ugh rambling here
but seriously stunning writing, hun.
also, it's really good to see you writing again ya knowt.
love ya & such stuff
xo
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19th Jul 2017 6:53pm
That's exactly the way I mean to make her feel, so good read on that... Thanks, it's nice to write something for sure. Love ya...