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In Silence, Radiant
stormwinds howl
in fury rage
lash dark clouds
in thunder running
lightning laced
they storm across
her cool
impassive face
she answers
in silence
serene
immortal grace
her face
softly knowing
her smile
sometimes showing
in silence
radiant
in fury rage
lash dark clouds
in thunder running
lightning laced
they storm across
her cool
impassive face
she answers
in silence
serene
immortal grace
her face
softly knowing
her smile
sometimes showing
in silence
radiant
Published 6th May 2017
| Edited 20th Jul 2017
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Anonymous
27th Aug 2017 12:41pm
very impressive and intriguing. Charmingly written
30th Aug 2017 5:17am
thanks sunset !
it appears that i have impressed,
intrigued
and charmed you -
mission accomplished =)
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
ALL the Best
jonni
it appears that i have impressed,
intrigued
and charmed you -
mission accomplished =)
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
ALL the Best
jonni
Wow, love this! Elegant.
I’ve been thinking about recording myself reading my own poetry, thanks for the inspiration to take the leap!
I’ve been thinking about recording myself reading my own poetry, thanks for the inspiration to take the leap!
thank you NightBird glad you like this - i used audacity - and a few "trial" apps to edit and produce the recording - and got the sound effects from the web still not too happy with the final audio - specially the "pop" right near the end ALL the Best jonni
