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Silence
silence
fills me
pushing you out
spreading ice
tendrils
entomb
protect
peaceful in here
alone with myself
pain muted
silence
fills me
pushing you out
spreading ice
tendrils
entomb
protect
peaceful in here
alone with myself
pain muted
silence
Published 26th Aug 2011
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2011 4:34pm
miladyelfn,
Seems it usually boils down to coming to terms with ourselves. You've done a great job of showing that feeling in the few words here. Enjoyed the peacefulness.
tornado
Seems it usually boils down to coming to terms with ourselves. You've done a great job of showing that feeling in the few words here. Enjoyed the peacefulness.
tornado
21st Oct 2011 6:17am
I feel cold and alone, and somehow, content and at peace with it. i don't want to leave this place you've created for me. One of my favorite poems! Thank you.
