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hush nature speaks
the sunrise spoke to me
it uttered riddles
laced on spider webs
in dewy silence
the forests deep
with the wise sentient
soldiers of old
that keep watch over me
in the oceans wide
balm to my soul
a cool jeweled place
I ache now
my soul talks to Mother Moon
please tell me
the secrets of Father Sun
she smiles at me wryly
hush child and open your mind
watch and observe
each thing in nature
a living being
all doing their part
beauty is here
the ferns cover
the mossy beds
for you to rest on
a place to lie in contemplation
nature provides for her own
listen and be nourished
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
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crimsin
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Published 30th Apr 2017
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Re. hush nature speaks
30th Apr 2017 1:19pm
Wow...this was stellar Crim! Loved it
One Lil thing though:
"each thing in nature
is a living being
all doing there part..."
Did u mean Their?
One Lil thing though:
"each thing in nature
is a living being
all doing there part..."
Did u mean Their?
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thank you dearest Poe I swear I always make the most obvious errors lol :) love Crim
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Anonymous
30th Apr 2017 1:36pm
And all we have to do is listen :)
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30th Apr 2017 1:42pm
Re. hush nature speaks
30th Apr 2017 1:54pm
Sincere beauty you bring to life here...I adore nature and the ode you have bled here my dear.
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1st May 2017 3:37am
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Anonymous
30th Apr 2017 2:14pm
Another excellent scribe, dear Brenda.
I enjoyed the serenity on this peaceful journey . Thank you for this lovely read. Xx
Miki
I enjoyed the serenity on this peaceful journey . Thank you for this lovely read. Xx
Miki
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1st May 2017 3:38am
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Anonymous
30th Apr 2017 4:40pm
Lovely dark angel, you've said all that needed saying and you've said it exquisitely. Thank you for gracing us with this jewel. So beautiful
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1st May 2017 3:39am
thank you lovely one you are such a tender soul.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts.. love Crim
Re. hush nature speaks
30th Apr 2017 4:49pm
Love this out of sight nature walk through your mind, Brenda.
To be able to write such outstanding poetry doesn't surprise
me in the least. You are a multi-gifted writer that travels down
many roads to the delight of those who follow you, or manage
to catch your writes by accidentally..
To be able to write such outstanding poetry doesn't surprise
me in the least. You are a multi-gifted writer that travels down
many roads to the delight of those who follow you, or manage
to catch your writes by accidentally..
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Re: Re. hush nature speaks
1st May 2017 3:40am
thank you dearest Jerry your comment warms my heart.. love you my friend.. xo Brenda
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30th Apr 2017 6:29pm
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1st May 2017 3:41am
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Anonymous
30th Apr 2017 6:35pm
pure gorgeousness, beautiful one.
this has such wonderfully delicate touches, the scent of dew, the spill of warm sunshine...
... it's like a meditation
aum
xo
this has such wonderfully delicate touches, the scent of dew, the spill of warm sunshine...
... it's like a meditation
aum
xo
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1st May 2017 3:42am
thank you beautiful one giggle I love your comment.. aum love you lady.. xo Brenda
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th Apr 2017 9:24pm
30th Apr 2017 9:23pm
You've charmed me with your peaceful side of nature
thank you pretty lady for granting us
such beauty
thank you pretty lady for granting us
such beauty
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1st May 2017 3:43am
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30th Apr 2017 11:56pm
The softer side of certain poets is spectacular and brilliant, even for us dark ones. Nicely done here Crim. My list is full or this would be there. <3
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1st May 2017 3:44am
thank you Mysterious One yes even us dark poets love the sunrises :) love Crim
Re. hush nature speaks
1st May 2017 9:17pm
Yes, you may be dark but nature still lights the way. A lovely write Lady Crim and such refreshing lines. Nature has much to show and tell us if we open our eyes and ears.
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4th May 2017 2:11pm
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2nd May 2017 7:38am
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4th May 2017 2:12pm
thank you lovely Kasai what a beautiful comment.. so happy this write could do that for you :) love Crim
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Anonymous
2nd May 2017 4:04pm
My smile widens
whenever I see you step out
of your darkness ...
love you, Lady Crim`sin
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4th May 2017 2:12pm
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2nd May 2017 6:05pm
seems like such a departure for you - such beauty, beautifully written - I really loved this a lot :-)
ehugs :-)
David
ehugs :-)
David
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4th May 2017 2:13pm
thank you David yes i'm always trying something new.. happy you enjoyed this walk through nature.. love Brenda
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Anonymous
12th May 2017 6:51am
This again brings me to our brains My Beautiful Brenda, which race continually, always talking not allowing us to settle and clam to hear all which is around us. We are both always learning...and I'm so happy I have you as a fellow classmate ;)
Breathtaking beauty here lovey one, I love you so very much!
Love Taryn xoxo
Breathtaking beauty here lovey one, I love you so very much!
Love Taryn xoxo
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12th May 2017 11:13am
thank you beautiful one I think this where we both go in our hearts when things are moving to fast in our minds a calming place.. so happy to have you on the journey with me.. I love you.. xo Brenda
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Anonymous
17th May 2017 4:41am
Brenda, beautiful one.. i love the purity of this write.. love you...
Dave
Dave
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18th May 2017 1:07am
thank you Dave for seeing the beauty in nature it's a place we can all rest.. I love you.. xo Brenda