A Vision

devastating poetry, Crim;
maybe the apocalypse begins in a dream...

thank you John funny enough you should say dream because this vision was just that a waking dream.. love Crim

Such a traumatic piece of writing, Brenda. An ingenuous way
to write of the creation, and much more believable than that
other fable. Super rich wording. If you wasn't thinking creation
. . . I was. Heh.Heh

thank you graciously Jerry it was kind of a waking vision though the meaning if there is any hasn't been shown to me.. love you..  xo Brenda

revelation upon revelation

thank you Whale for the add and read.. love Brenda

It's interesting how so many of us are having the same kind of "epiphanies" or visions of a bleak and struggling world. I agree with the comment above, it felt a bit creation but with a twist at the end.  The promised land was not the manna what they'd been fed.  Beautiful and brilliant write, lovely dark angel

thank you lovely one the world is indeed struggling what came to mind when I was writing this was the end of our world as we know it.. I deeply appreciate and cherish your thoughts.. love Crim

Brenda.. you never fail to deliver.. love always..







Dave

thank you Dave love you my brother.. xo Brenda

I really like this but I am not entirely sure why, or if we actually need a reason to like something :-)

sending 1000 ehugs :-)

thank you David for enjoying the read.. love and hugs.. Brenda

But for the beasts in plural, looks like a re-rendering of Revelation chapters 13 to 17.

I looked up Revelations 13 it bares some similarity but not quite.. though I am pleased you think it does.. love Crim

I wish I could have visions as potent as this one, Lady Crim.  A fascinating view of that true king and the fate of the beasts.   Bleak but thrilling work!

thank you graciously Sir Crow it is a dark vision indeed.. love Crim

The devastation​ is mighty...we need a good cleansing

thank you Tim indeed we do.. love Crim

Such a captivating piece

thank you most kindly Emily.. love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda...so many profound lines in this ink...it is funny how the mind works and we place such high regard on which is not deserving of such in the end...clouding our own gut instincts...yes this captured it all for me...

"worshiped the beasts
that had the power
to call the stars
from their seats in space

they performed wonders
in the sight of all mankind
their minds marked
with delusions & confusion
did not see the true King
when he appeared"

Wonderful ink lovely one! I love you!

Love Taryn xoxo

thank you beautiful one for embracing this write this write and making a deeper connection with it.. I love you :) xo Brenda