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El Ni·ño Renga
(linked haiku)
1
from tidal warming
in the winter of my birth—
deluge to downpour
2
coming up for air
in the rushing waves' escape—
kelp beds where I lay
3
even in my sleep
these underwater senses—
riding the currents
4
gazing at the moon
connecting with her phases—
my other mother
5
years of endless drought
gone into hiding for now
never far behind
6
return to winter
celebrating in the rain
of the El Ni·ño
April 27 ( NaPoWriMo 2017 )
1
from tidal warming
in the winter of my birth—
deluge to downpour
2
coming up for air
in the rushing waves' escape—
kelp beds where I lay
3
even in my sleep
these underwater senses—
riding the currents
4
gazing at the moon
connecting with her phases—
my other mother
5
years of endless drought
gone into hiding for now
never far behind
6
return to winter
celebrating in the rain
of the El Ni·ño
April 27 ( NaPoWriMo 2017 )
Published 27th Apr 2017
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27th Apr 2017 6:32pm
A fine one for the mermaid archives, reminding me a bit of the rebirth subtext to Hendrix' "A Merman I Should Turn to Be."
Your lines are just as potent and more elegant with the haiku format.
gazing at the moon
connecting with her phases—
my other mother
Mine too Jade, and I might come from her dark side. Excellent write.
Your lines are just as potent and more elegant with the haiku format.
gazing at the moon
connecting with her phases—
my other mother
Mine too Jade, and I might come from her dark side. Excellent write.
27th Apr 2017 8:18pm
Thank you, dear crowfly my friend, and the way you've expressed your reception of my 'ku.
27th Apr 2017 8:03pm
5
years of endless drought
gone into hiding for now
never far behind
6
return to winter
celebrating in the rain
of the El Ni·ño
the last two are my favorites... La Niña... Mermaid indeed!
thom
years of endless drought
gone into hiding for now
never far behind
6
return to winter
celebrating in the rain
of the El Ni·ño
the last two are my favorites... La Niña... Mermaid indeed!
thom
Thank you dear Thom, for your expression & support of the set's image, of how you join me where the storms are welcome.
~queen
~queen
27th Apr 2017 10:42pm
The Little Boy
And it's mother
a renga
like no other!
of course, for it had to be from the pen of Jadey! Whale 🐳 said it best!
And it's mother
a renga
like no other!
of course, for it had to be from the pen of Jadey! Whale 🐳 said it best!
28th Apr 2017 3:18am
