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In the Wrong
My laughing evil
Stands nigh
Apathy fills me
The smooth skin
Of the razor
Sliting me in two
I am the depth
Of a deepest despair
I erect the wrong
Beware, beware
I am deaths song
Beware, beware...
Stands nigh
Apathy fills me
The smooth skin
Of the razor
Sliting me in two
I am the depth
Of a deepest despair
I erect the wrong
Beware, beware
I am deaths song
Beware, beware...
Published 25th Apr 2017
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Anonymous
25th Apr 2017 5:00am
damn, this is like a summary of my Ward writes, twisted and dark Anon, makes me want to read it again and again to see where exactly you were going with this one.
25th Apr 2017 6:00am
I have loved your Ward writes, I love the darkness overflowing in them, it's incredible. I am very glad you enjoyed this piece, I guess I made it rather vague, it's in a small way about addiction and the evil we do to ourselves we'd never do to anyone else, there are other themes to it but that was what I was think of when I wrote it.
26th Apr 2017 3:16am
27th Apr 2017 7:30am
Yes indeed I had some dark thoughts creeping around my mind during the writing of this piece, best to get them out so they aren't cluttering up the mind. Glad you enjoyed this piece, Grace. Always lovely to see you drop by:) ~anonshadow😏
Well thats deep n a bit disturbing. Just hope your inner violence with in you you dont let it out besides in your poems n venting to someone
No, not often, I am actually quite calm and gentle in person. Well, most of the time anyways... Thank you for stopping by for the read, I appreciate it. ~anonshadow😏
