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Goth Lord
I'm your little goth whore
will you have me my Lord
or banish me to the shadows?
where fingers claw
the darkness bites
with vicious intent
I need a morphine drip
to stop the pain
I'm losing my mind
I'm going insane
dearest Dark Lord
you know the landscapes of hell
will you make me your Queen?
or am I forever cast
in the role of concubine?
as I bleed out my desire for you
I hold wilted black lilies
symbols of my soiled soul
a wreath I hang on my tomb
it awaits me
I walk in the shadows
a lowly wraith
demons feed from me
do you know
the macabre spectacle I am?
neither dark nor light
free me from my binds
show me the way
with you blackened tongue
whisper lies
that will awaken me
remind me who I am
I've known you since time began
this is your game
let us play it again
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Re: Re. Goth Lord
18th Apr 2017 12:18pm
Re. Goth Lord
18th Apr 2017 9:57am
caught in a Limbo, Crim,
where love goes by another name;
your verse is absinthe...
where love goes by another name;
your verse is absinthe...
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Re: Re. Goth Lord
18th Apr 2017 12:18pm
Re. Goth Lord
18th Apr 2017 2:36pm
Interesting Crim as I read...you seem to reach for your dark to show you a light and I reach for my light to escape the dark. I am trying to embrace as you do here. A power in your words. I thank you.
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Re: Re. Goth Lord
18th Apr 2017 4:17pm
thank you graciously Mel I feel you we all reach something to pull us out.. love Crim
Re. Goth Lord
18th Apr 2017 8:33pm
"I've known you since time began
this is your game
let us play it again"
Ahhh . . . Kickass last three lines . . . Finishing out a fantastic kickass poem.
When you put your cards on the table nothing is held back . . . Nothing!
this is your game
let us play it again"
Ahhh . . . Kickass last three lines . . . Finishing out a fantastic kickass poem.
When you put your cards on the table nothing is held back . . . Nothing!
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Re: Re. Goth Lord
21st Apr 2017 4:04pm
Re. Goth Lord
18th Apr 2017 9:23pm
"A lowly wraith?" Nope. You're a lady of darkness and vision, and any gothic lord would treasure you, seems to me. Love this!
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Re: Re. Goth Lord
21st Apr 2017 4:04pm
Re. Goth Lord
Anonymous
18th Apr 2017 11:03pm
Ah, the plea in this is potent. Looking it right in the face, acknowledging it has the power and still willing to play again. That takes strength. You have an amazing spirit in you, dark angel
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Re: Re. Goth Lord
21st Apr 2017 4:05pm
Re. Goth Lord
Anonymous
19th Apr 2017 00:26am
Brenda.. simply brilliant.. as always you simply mesmerize me.. love you..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Goth Lord
21st Apr 2017 4:05pm
Re. Goth Lord
19th Apr 2017 2:38am
Re: Re. Goth Lord
21st Apr 2017 4:06pm
Re. Goth Lord
19th Apr 2017 6:40am
Neither dark, or light;
an internal battle, never a winner.
We embrace them both...
an internal battle, never a winner.
We embrace them both...
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Re: Re. Goth Lord
21st Apr 2017 4:07pm
Re: Re. Goth Lord
21st Apr 2017 4:07pm
Re. Goth Lord
Anonymous
12th May 2017 5:23am
My Beautiful Brenda...calling upon your Lord will certainly not be done in vain...your voice has called to him since the beginning and will continue without an end...in your darkness the light shows itself to guide you...one doesn't come without the other...the play hand in hand and how you embrace it is hauntingly and admirably beautiful.
I love you my love!
Love Taryn xoxo
I love you my love!
Love Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. Goth Lord
12th May 2017 11:44am
thank beautiful one for loving the darkness in me as well as the light.. you always have please don't think it's gone unnoticed.. I love you! xo Brenda