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Invisible
I'm jagged
cut off at the sleeves
taking unguarded risk
not doing what they please
Invisible
out here in the breeze
standing with the masses
not knowing who I'll be
I'm dust
swept off to the edges
hidden from the sunshine
not wanting you to sneeze
Undesirable
drifting to a different tune
trust lost along with the heartache
not taking it anymore
Visions
giving voices to those with alternate choices
trying things that make you sing
not alone no longer
Invisible
cut off at the sleeves
taking unguarded risk
not doing what they please
Invisible
out here in the breeze
standing with the masses
not knowing who I'll be
I'm dust
swept off to the edges
hidden from the sunshine
not wanting you to sneeze
Undesirable
drifting to a different tune
trust lost along with the heartache
not taking it anymore
Visions
giving voices to those with alternate choices
trying things that make you sing
not alone no longer
Invisible
Published 14th Apr 2017
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Anonymous
14th Apr 2017 9:47pm
There's a lot of vulnerability expressed in this one, I think. I hit the stanza about dust and stopped. Went back and read it 3 times. I loved that analogy. "not alone no longer....invisible" Loved the ending, it gives a hint of hope
14th Apr 2017 10:25pm
The highest of Highs and the lowest of Lows-They are The True Muse-Gorgeous Poetry Good Sir!!!
14th Apr 2017 10:56pm
yes this style had allowed your voice to tell its story with enough space to breathe in -much enjoyed
15th Apr 2017 6:26am
I will echo FromTheAsh... I stopped at dust and had to reread it...
This is such a painfully beautiful write, thank you for sharing!
This is such a painfully beautiful write, thank you for sharing!
15th Apr 2017 2:26pm
