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My Sweet Dog is Gone 10 Days Now
People who have lost pets get it
They know the vacancy in your heart
I pass the box that contains her ashes
Haven't had the will yet to look inside
Her ceremony is on Friday
Friends will gather to see her ashes spread
The park was her favorite place
Trying to climb a tree
or basking in the sunlight on the esplanade
I wrote her eulogy the other day
Kind of wrote itself
First line is :
Why Did She Have to Die ?
I'm gonna have a hard time at the end
The emotion will get to me
I've done this for two parents
It's not all sad, there's some funny stuff too
I'm gonna cry
I have no answers
Just memories of my mixed breed hound
Guess that's gotta be enough
They know the vacancy in your heart
I pass the box that contains her ashes
Haven't had the will yet to look inside
Her ceremony is on Friday
Friends will gather to see her ashes spread
The park was her favorite place
Trying to climb a tree
or basking in the sunlight on the esplanade
I wrote her eulogy the other day
Kind of wrote itself
First line is :
Why Did She Have to Die ?
I'm gonna have a hard time at the end
The emotion will get to me
I've done this for two parents
It's not all sad, there's some funny stuff too
I'm gonna cry
I have no answers
Just memories of my mixed breed hound
Guess that's gotta be enough
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Re. My Sweet Dog is Gone 10 Days Now
13th Apr 2017 00:58am
Dearest Poet I feel for your pain keep writing it out and know it's good to cry..she is and always will be your child..
love you my friend..
xo Brenda
love you my friend..
xo Brenda
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one day it will pass but for right now, it sucks
thx B she was a soulful warrior, wasn't even sure she was all dog. think there was some human in there too
xx
thx B she was a soulful warrior, wasn't even sure she was all dog. think there was some human in there too
xx
Re. My Sweet Dog is Gone 10 Days Now
Anonymous
13th Apr 2017 1:27am
My Dearest Poe...this broke my heart and tears were shed while reading how this loss has so understandably affected you...I say this and you know it's true...if I didn't HAVE to be at work on Friday, I'd be standing off to the side by some tree in support of you both...I'm so sorry I can't be there. She will rest peacefully...take all the time you need...write it and like My Beautiful Brenda said...crying it out is good.
Much love to you
- S
Xo
Much love to you
- S
Xo
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it's too damn quiet in here.
She was always calling the shots
Even in her senior years, she was the Boss, we just followed
Miss that feisty mama
Thx Babe xx
She was always calling the shots
Even in her senior years, she was the Boss, we just followed
Miss that feisty mama
Thx Babe xx
Re. My Sweet Dog is Gone 10 Days Now
13th Apr 2017 1:33am
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Re. My Sweet Dog is Gone 10 Days Now
13th Apr 2017 12:17pm
Sometimes you just need a good cry. Let out and don't worry about it! I hope you find some peace in the good memories.
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13th Apr 2017 12:29pm
Thanks DG It just gotta play out , got tons of pictures to celebrate her being ...
Re. My Sweet Dog is Gone 10 Days Now
Anonymous
13th Apr 2017 1:36pm
Losing a "pet" is more akin to losing a child or family member. Especially when they've been such an integral part of your world for so long. My heart goes out to you. Again you bring me to tears with this one. More hugs for you
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14th Apr 2017 3:13am
I'll take those hugs, could use them right about now It's fun to relive all the fun moments we had with her. Trying to do that now rather than relive those horrible last days. Thank you xo P
Re. My Sweet Dog is Gone 10 Days Now
13th Apr 2017 4:51pm
Nothing I say will really help - only time will paper over the cracks and all you can do is try to remember happy memories to soothe your heart - I have been there and I know it's not easy - keep thinking and writing it will pass :-)
I will keep you in my thoughts :-)
I will keep you in my thoughts :-)
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14th Apr 2017 3:14am
Thanks D Been a rough few weeks but it's starting to get a little better. Will send her off in style Pizza and cake afterwards Peace brother
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Anonymous
19th Apr 2017 00:42am
Boss.. she is always with you.. our pets are so important.. but i'm sure she knows your heart is heavy, and wants you to remember the laughter.. the good times, the memories.. those are forever, and so is the bond that unites you.. my heart feels your pain.. and understands your loss..
Dave
Dave
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Thanks Dave
Been a rough couple of weeks, trying to stay busy and push forward
Appreciate the RL add son
Been a rough couple of weeks, trying to stay busy and push forward
Appreciate the RL add son