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Passion
I lay next to you, drowning in your eyes.
And there is no other place I’d rather be.
Your fingertips brush against my skin
And send shivers running down my spine
I can see myself thru your eyes
All my imperfections disappear
Your lips softly meet mine
And our breathing becomes one
Let me drown in your eyes
Our fingers gently intertwined
Speaking a language of their own
Now our hearts beating as one,
We drown in each other’s eyes
And there is no other place I’d rather be.
Your fingertips brush against my skin
And send shivers running down my spine
I can see myself thru your eyes
All my imperfections disappear
Your lips softly meet mine
And our breathing becomes one
Let me drown in your eyes
Our fingers gently intertwined
Speaking a language of their own
Now our hearts beating as one,
We drown in each other’s eyes
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Re. Passion
12th Apr 2017 8:36am
you speak of one lover
deep ocean of the eyes
finesse of the plaintive skin;
but if this were some other place...
deep ocean of the eyes
finesse of the plaintive skin;
but if this were some other place...
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12th Apr 2017 10:50am
Re. Passion
12th Apr 2017 3:27pm
The eyes have it! - it's been a while since I have seen the eyes that can melt and meld - this was a beautiful reminder :-)
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Re: Re. Passion
12th Apr 2017 3:46pm
Thank you David_Macleod.... I love eyes, and eye contact. I even hold eye contact with strangers in passing. You get to see their souls. They cannot hide.
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12th Apr 2017 7:23pm
Re. Passion
19th Apr 2017 4:12pm
The eyes reveal everything ....... well done Miz C.
The length of gaze, the deeper the search .... the more rewarding the connection is.
Keep em coming ... im loving it
The length of gaze, the deeper the search .... the more rewarding the connection is.
Keep em coming ... im loving it
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Re. Passion
5th May 2017 9:35am
Love the love in your poem....love is so uplifting...even a fleeting love affair makes your soul and heart lift themselves from the mundane to ecstacy
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5th May 2017 12:15pm
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10th May 2017 3:17pm