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Random Thoughts On Wisdom
the orchid loses her bloom
now adorning the ground
she cries not for her beauty lost
with knowledge it will be renewed
her glory will be known again
so it is with us
~*~*~
the moon doesn't resent the sun
for outshining him
the night is ruled by the cool radiant orb
while day is warmed by our ball of fire
each having place in this kingdom
~*~*~
the willow is beaten about by tumultuous winds
it gracefully bows and bends
though it never breaks
with leaves that look like they're crying tears
I weep with it
~*~*~
gold is put through the refining fire
so it is with our souls
that we may come out the other side
shining with the purity of truth
~*~*~
the rains will come
floods shall carry us away
we shall find ourselves on the other side
enlightened by the trials of life
~*~*~
we live to die another day
everyday a new birth
let your third eye blink open
& lay witness to all that nature has to teach
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Re. Random Thoughts On Wisdom
4th Apr 2017 8:24pm
I loved this when I read it. We all need to sit randomly and think more - let things come to us vs. knocking them down.
The Universe, particularly trees, have so much wisdom to impart.
Thank you for this. xo
The Universe, particularly trees, have so much wisdom to impart.
Thank you for this. xo
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6th Apr 2017 6:08pm
thank you graciously lovely lady you're so right so much to be learned in nature.. love Brenda
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Anonymous
4th Apr 2017 8:24pm
Last stanza. That is all.
Pictorial musings my dear.
Pictorial musings my dear.

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4th Apr 2017 8:50pm
Brenda, this one is so "Unlike" you. It resonates
with beauty and revival to the nth. It gives us the
need to believe we can conquer everything life
sends our way. So fucking refreshing my friend
and I loved every word of it.
with beauty and revival to the nth. It gives us the
need to believe we can conquer everything life
sends our way. So fucking refreshing my friend
and I loved every word of it.
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6th Apr 2017 6:09pm
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5th Apr 2017 00:36am
This is a beautifully written piece. I love the imagery that is coming to alive in this one. I love it.
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5th Apr 2017 1:26am
Love love loooooovvvveeee this!!! That tree look alot like a tree from the park I lived Ross from growing up!
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Anonymous
5th Apr 2017 3:37am
Okay, I want to curl up under that tree and read this poem over and over again. This is beautiful!

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6th Apr 2017 6:12pm
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5th Apr 2017 4:19am
Beautifully done, Crim, the way nature is reborn
time and time again. We are after all, just one small
part of her.
The weeping Willow, the purity of truth,
exquisit lines, talented one...
time and time again. We are after all, just one small
part of her.
The weeping Willow, the purity of truth,
exquisit lines, talented one...
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6th Apr 2017 6:13pm
thank you lovely Kasai such beautiful words from a exquisite poetess :) love Crim
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Re. Random Thoughts On Wisdom
5th Apr 2017 3:19pm
Such a profound write, dear Crim!
Loved every line of it, the imagery in this one is stunning...
Thank you for sharing these words of wisdom
Love, Duende
Loved every line of it, the imagery in this one is stunning...
Thank you for sharing these words of wisdom
Love, Duende
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Re: Re. Random Thoughts On Wisdom
6th Apr 2017 6:14pm
thank you beautiful Duende for such beautiful thoughts on this write :) love Crim
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5th Apr 2017 7:40pm
Very wise to seek guidance in nature rather than follow most human paths. Humanity has lost respect for Mother Earth at their peril. Your thoughts may be random but they shine Lady Crim.
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6th Apr 2017 6:15pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow for warming my heart with your thoughts :) love Crim
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Anonymous
8th Apr 2017 2:49am
Brenda.. your wisdom makes my heart warm.. you just say it as it should be.. love you..
Dave
Dave

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Re: Re. Random Thoughts On Wisdom
8th Apr 2017 9:57am
thank you Dave for showing me love on this different kind of write.. love Brenda
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Anonymous
10th Apr 2017 11:46pm
My Beautiful Brenda, I am sure there is no need to tell you this was my favorite stanza...
"the willow is beaten about by tumultuous winds
it gracefully bows and bends
though it never breaks
with leaves that look like they're crying tears
I weep with it"
May each day offer the gift of sight...
I love you!!
xoxo Taryn
"the willow is beaten about by tumultuous winds
it gracefully bows and bends
though it never breaks
with leaves that look like they're crying tears
I weep with it"
May each day offer the gift of sight...
I love you!!
xoxo Taryn

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12th Apr 2017 2:36am
thank you my love so happy you loved those lines cos it was you who inspired them.. love you madly.. xo Brenda