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so far from you now
my lust for your masculine form
kept me distracted
I stayed the course
when in tune with your poetry & music
your artistry drew me a new life
in charcoal grays
now I'm out of step
not quite right in my thoughts
I need to dream to live
you're the muse
that has fed me fire
from your rock hard abs
to your intellect
that sets my mind ablaze
let me taste you now
I'm in the midst of a dry spell
cos you long ago
put away your poetic pen
you crushed me up
& snorted my lust
like it was cocaine
it fed your ego
left me cold
still I think of you
how your art
kept me sane
when the world was skewed
& I had nothing else to steady me
my fantasies were a safe place
as my madness howled
I came to this place
seeking solace
I found it in you
you the heroin I still phened for
made poetry exciting
together you & I a speedball
we reached the moon
just to crash back down
upon the Earth
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 8th Apr 2017
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8th Apr 2017 10:17am
Brenda! 👍
You've penned an expression which left me silent, at the same time in admiration for the way you've delivered it. Not easy both the emotions expressed and the way they're delivered effectively.
You've penned an expression which left me silent, at the same time in admiration for the way you've delivered it. Not easy both the emotions expressed and the way they're delivered effectively.
12th Apr 2017 2:37am
thank you KDAmB that I could evoke emotions with a write always make me happy :) love Brenda
8th Apr 2017 10:54am
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8th Apr 2017 1:11pm
But you made it to moon. ❤
Your flags fly together. No earthling can ever take that away.
I love the accompanying art and the words. You're kicking Napo's butt and taking names!
Your flags fly together. No earthling can ever take that away.
I love the accompanying art and the words. You're kicking Napo's butt and taking names!
12th Apr 2017 2:38am
8th Apr 2017 2:24pm
Last stanza is the kickass one. We reach for that old
elusive moon for all it is worth, and if we are fortunate
enough to latch on it, there is only one way to go from
from there. And when we fall it is not a nice thing. Why
then do we regroup and try again to touch the moon?
elusive moon for all it is worth, and if we are fortunate
enough to latch on it, there is only one way to go from
from there. And when we fall it is not a nice thing. Why
then do we regroup and try again to touch the moon?
12th Apr 2017 2:39am
thank you dearest Jerry I guess we continue our quest because one sip on the moon is never enough ;) love Brenda
Anonymous
8th Apr 2017 3:31pm
Brenda.. so powerful.. you're the best.. love you..
Dave
Dave
12th Apr 2017 2:40am
8th Apr 2017 6:37pm
A male muse, and a rough one. This gent has my gratitude for having turned you out as one of the best poets here. Thanks for this look at the inspiration behind some of your lines. Wonderful work Lady Crim!
12th Apr 2017 2:40am
Anonymous
8th Apr 2017 7:02pm
"you crushed me up
& snorted my lust
like it was cocaine
it fed your ego
left me cold"
How do they always find us? The perfect drug for their addiction. If this is your dry spell, dear one, I can't wait to see you at full thrall. Beautifully penned
& snorted my lust
like it was cocaine
it fed your ego
left me cold"
How do they always find us? The perfect drug for their addiction. If this is your dry spell, dear one, I can't wait to see you at full thrall. Beautifully penned
12th Apr 2017 2:41am
thank you lovely one you gave me big smiles with your comment.. it was meant for our paths to cross I think for both the good and bad.. love Crim
8th Apr 2017 7:23pm
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9th Apr 2017 3:40am
I am blown away by this one - unusually I am speechless :-)
sending 1000 ehugs :-)
sending 1000 ehugs :-)
12th Apr 2017 2:43am
9th Apr 2017 6:06pm
Felt this one... each and every word of it!
Outstanding poem, dear Crim
Love, Duende
Outstanding poem, dear Crim
Love, Duende
12th Apr 2017 2:43am
Anonymous
10th Apr 2017 11:39pm
My Beautiful Brenda...keep searching for that trip to the moon lovely one because each time you do you spill a write that is fabulously written...you take us all there with you, whether feasting or in famine....
I love you very much!!
xoxo Taryn
I love you very much!!
xoxo Taryn
12th Apr 2017 2:44am
thank you my beautiful one I'm sure there are many more trips to the moon and I will treasure them all.. I love you dear one ever so much.. kisses you passionately.. xo Brenda
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