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The NaPoWriMo series: The Attribution of Bein...'
Existin' within an oasis of nothin'
Lost
Confused
Dark
Riled
Light
Love
Gratification
Passion
to want for a taste of anything
Harried
Marred
Fiendish
Wretched
A compiled a mass of somethin'
Peace
Joy
Happiness
Release
Nestled in a realm of 'beamin'
These 16 points,
of light n' dark traits,
form a foundation
of being...
Published 2nd Apr 2017
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Wow! What a kick-off entry! Why didn't you post this in the challenge?! Did I miss it?
2nd Apr 2017 12:29pm
lol I'm sooooo sorry my sweetheart but I tried to find it lol I did ask u to link me in ur piece I commented lol Figured at least U will know I was with u in this challenge :) oh n thank u always for your support :)
2nd Apr 2017 12:34pm
Omg! You did! I forgot! I asked Webmiss to pin it but she must've forgotten. We were utterly swamped yesterday between the comp and 1st of the month here. Go ahead and post it. It's my fault it didn't make it; not yours. I'm sure that's what Johnny would say too.
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2nd Apr 2017 12:35pm
LOL! The link!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9560/105/#388989
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9560/105/#388989
2nd Apr 2017 12:42pm
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2017 1:07pm
whooooooot whooooooot!
stoked you've hopped on the crazy train
excellent spill poe
stoked you've hopped on the crazy train
excellent spill poe
2nd Apr 2017 1:24pm
Wweeellll you couldn't imagine I'd allow you to suffer out there without my protection could you!? lol jk... Ur way too badass to need anyone :) But yea...I came in pieces lol thank you my sweetest Katja always! :)
2nd Apr 2017 1:19pm
I like how you expressed your poem with few words.Yet the reader must study the true meaning. Your words are packed with meaning.
2nd Apr 2017 1:26pm
Why I thank you kindly for your thoughts n time, truly grateful for that :)
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2017 2:03pm
This is a strong piece. Deceptively complex despite its simple layout. Love it
2nd Apr 2017 3:41pm
Aaaaawww ur the best my sweet Ash... Wow, just realized how that sounds lol Anywho thank u much!
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2017 8:29pm
Hah! Watch the enunciation around kids!
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2nd Apr 2017 3:42pm
Big thanks bro! N hey you should get in on this thread too! I'm positive you can do it... :)
2nd Apr 2017 3:32pm
2nd Apr 2017 3:44pm
I agree sweetie but hey, all we can hope for is to do is the best we can be right?
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3rd Apr 2017 4:45am
Amazing write baby, absolutely loved it and I'm assuming the start of kicking off that challenge? :)
Can't wait to see more poems :") mmmmuah
Can't wait to see more poems :") mmmmuah
3rd Apr 2017 9:02am
That would be a correct assessment lol... Happy you liked n as always I'm honored for your support of my ink pudding :)
