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All you need is love
Love is all you need
Forgiveness is for all
Give peace a chance
Maybe it will be OK
Maybe nobody needs fucked
Maybe hate is never righteous
You can’t love hate
With just more hate
But as has been said already
“There is no need to announce it here!”
So shut the fuck up
dry your fuckin eyes
You have finally reached
The space where the first
Amendment comes to die
Quietly with the rest of
Your rights and desires
For I am a selfish God
And there will be no other
Published 31st Mar 2017
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31st Mar 2017 10:12pm
Not sure what this is all about but it reads damn well.
A comment of Western culture, spiked through by the OT God?
"For I am a selfish God
And there will be no other" ... the God of the Old Testament?? (For I the Lord your God am a jealous God ... thou shalt have no other God's but me)
A comment of Western culture, spiked through by the OT God?
"For I am a selfish God
And there will be no other" ... the God of the Old Testament?? (For I the Lord your God am a jealous God ... thou shalt have no other God's but me)
1st Apr 2017 10:44pm
maybe I am god for me? thank you for spending time on this poem - that means a lot :-)
1st Apr 2017 1:48am
well done, David_Macleod, I like your message, (if I interpreted it correctly, or not) Either way, nicely written
1st Apr 2017 10:46pm
thank you so much for such a compliment - please feel free to interpret any poem I write - make writing interesting :-)
1st Apr 2017 1:05pm
1st Apr 2017 10:47pm
2nd Apr 2017 9:50pm
Interesting write.
Excellent release of aggressive expression i feel in this .
It starts off as almost an upbeat motivational write and ends in whats seems to be coming from a totally opposite perspective, a view lacking empathy, sympathy, compassion.
Almost seems as if you are mocking "peace and love"
Could make some pretty cool metal lyrics.
I would love to hear what inspired this write and your take on it.
Excellent release of aggressive expression i feel in this .
It starts off as almost an upbeat motivational write and ends in whats seems to be coming from a totally opposite perspective, a view lacking empathy, sympathy, compassion.
Almost seems as if you are mocking "peace and love"
Could make some pretty cool metal lyrics.
I would love to hear what inspired this write and your take on it.
7th Apr 2017 00:09am
The inspiration came from a couple of recent DU comps - sometimes peace and love and those seeking it need mocked. Metal lyrics? fascinating idea - beyond me I'm afraid but feel free to suggest :-)
6th Apr 2017 5:51am
You know i believe in something larger than myself that being said i also believe that difference of opinion is what fascinates me even more. I believe other opinions should not only be tolerated but explored. I hate to imagine a world where everybody has the same thoughts, same actions and reactions, what a dull world this would be indeed. So David bring it on, hit me with what you got and we can bounce around the pro's and con's, good natured adversity is just what this damn world needs. Another thought provoked, i love success. Much love and mad respect,
me
me
7th Apr 2017 00:12am
I have always followed the "You May Be Wrong Doctrine" that's what keeps my ego in check :-) thank you for your understanding and support - 1000 ehugs on their way :-)
2nd May 2018 11:39am
Well if your the only God.
Assume your position
And act like it.
And whoever your writing it for
If she loves you, she will submit
Simple
Assume your position
And act like it.
And whoever your writing it for
If she loves you, she will submit
Simple
