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Re. False truth.
28th Mar 2017 9:42pm
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28th Mar 2017 9:52pm
Alcohol is a very deceptive companion. Always appreciate your thoughts, Leo. (: LostGirl
Re: Re. False truth.
28th Mar 2017 9:55pm
Almost everytime i hang out woth alcohol i get in trouble, either that its so fuckin awesome that when alcohol goes home or to someone elses house to play, i get sad. Alcohol is mean . Bad alcohol Bad
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Re: Re. False truth.
28th Mar 2017 10:00pm
Re. False truth.
28th Mar 2017 9:56pm
I have a relationship
A frenemy, if you will
With whiskey and coke
Hold on i may,
always I'll give in to will
Great Write LG.
A frenemy, if you will
With whiskey and coke
Hold on i may,
always I'll give in to will
Great Write LG.
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Re: Re. False truth.
28th Mar 2017 10:01pm
Thank you, my dear. I always appreciate when you take the time to comment. Whiskey and coke? Killer. (;
Re. False truth.
I think its been proven coke is more dangerous to our health than alcohol. While alcohol is more dangerous to our tongue...and judgment.
"Say that out loud!", said Alcohol. "It's funny!" But Alcohol was wrong. So. Very. Wrong.
This is underlined with the sad melancholy of a truth that doesn't want to exist, but does nonetheless as a sucker punch. Quick. Sharp. On on point.
"Say that out loud!", said Alcohol. "It's funny!" But Alcohol was wrong. So. Very. Wrong.
This is underlined with the sad melancholy of a truth that doesn't want to exist, but does nonetheless as a sucker punch. Quick. Sharp. On on point.
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Re: Re. False truth.
31st Mar 2017 5:00pm
I couldn't agree with you more, Wise One. This is very, very well put. I consider it to be an honour when you share some of your wisdom, Ahavati. Sincerely, I thank you. (:
Re. False truth.
29th Mar 2017 2:52am
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Re. False truth.
29th Mar 2017 8:03am
There's a play on the last line "wet lies" that's tragic ... painful ... regretful, and yet sensuous,
Great use of the art form.
Great use of the art form.
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Re: Re. False truth.
I am truly humbled to have you critique my work. Thank you for taking the time out of your busy day to do so. I appreciate this more than you know. LostGirl (:
Re. False truth.
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2017 10:51pm
I honestly admire how you compile few words and detonate.
Amazing my love, amazing. I'm going to challenge myself
because of you
Amazing my love, amazing. I'm going to challenge myself
because of you
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Re: Re. False truth.
3rd Apr 2017 11:18pm
Thank you, my darling. I am always grateful for your time and comments. Your lovely praise is a bright spot in my day. xox (:
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Re: Re. False truth.
17th Aug 2019 11:03pm
Good.
I may be a selfish drunk but at least I'm not boring.
Cheers. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
I may be a selfish drunk but at least I'm not boring.
Cheers. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
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