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Meghavati
She said
"yes
in the mountains
during winter
covered in heavy fog for days...
a cross between misty rain and fog..
many mornings are like this
Some folks hate...
not this gal
she sits on the front porch
with a cuppa
and
gets bathed in it!! "
Author's Note!
Written By The Title and The Titleholder! © Meghavati! 2017. All rights reserved. Published under ful (presumed)l license/authority! ;-)
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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20th Mar 2017 5:18pm
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20th Mar 2017 5:24pm
Re: Re. Meghavati
20th Mar 2017 6:14pm
Glad you too liked this one! Wish I had written this- my Friend who I am sure will never have published this one has so I had to go ahead and do it! :-) Thanks heaps for the RL add!! Cheers! KDAmB
Re. Meghavati
21st Mar 2017 1:51am
I'm with her, you gotta ring out every piece of living that you can :-)
excellent :-)
excellent :-)
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Re: Re. Meghavati
21st Mar 2017 8:56pm
Welcome Dave! Glad to hear that Dave! I thank You for your kind appreciaiton of her words. Cheers! KDAmB
Re. Meghavati
21st Mar 2017 4:56am
Peaceful pen.
This certainly came from a beautiful mind. Thank you KD for publishing her beautiful words, it was a joy to read!
~anonshadow😏
This certainly came from a beautiful mind. Thank you KD for publishing her beautiful words, it was a joy to read!
~anonshadow😏
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Re: Re. Meghavati
21st Mar 2017 12:19pm
No doubt about that my brother I.e a beautiful mind is where it came from! ☺ I Thank You sincerely for your visit and appreciation of my Friends' talent and beauty! ☺
Re. Meghavati
21st Mar 2017 12:37pm
...as the 'burra's mantra carries on the breath of Eucalyptus. What an infusion! Had a morning just like that : )
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Re: Re. Meghavati
21st Mar 2017 12:43pm
Welcome dear friend Meghavati! Just as your poem above, your comment is a poem on it's own! ☺ some people indeed are oblivious to their own talents! ☺ I thank you sincerely for your 'gracious' comment and the poem above!! ☺ Cheers! KDAmB
Re. Meghavati
21st Mar 2017 11:27pm
A Wonderful Gift You gave with this Fine Pen!!!
Thank You Kindly for sharing Dear Brother!!!
Thank You Kindly for sharing Dear Brother!!!
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Re: Re. Meghavati
21st Mar 2017 11:54pm
Welcome Dear Bro Soul!! Thank You for the kind appreciation the great poet's ink which am glad to share with my peers here! Thank You once again! Cheers! KDAmB
Re. Meghavati
22nd Mar 2017 4:30pm
Thanks for bringing this poem to my attention; love the switch from the big picture to the mundane detail of real living.
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Re: Re. Meghavati
23rd Mar 2017 10:45am
Welcome dear friend Josh! Deeply appreciate your visit, keen insight and kind appreciation of my friends work. Thank You so much. Kind regards KDAmB ☺