The symphony of life

loved the uplifting -and -upbeat nature of the read.

Thank you I appreciate your feedback 🌈🌺

I enjoyed the message as well. I know you're looking for friendly feedback, but an alteration in form would make this more poetic in style.

The symphony of life
supports bands
and musical instruments
that play along to beat
of your life.

Sounds that inspire you
and tunes that at times seem dull.
It doesn't really matter
as long as your trumpet
continues to blow.

Surprizes [sp] you will find out
along the way.Those that you thought
were your nearest and dearest
couldn't be more far away.

When you continue drumming
and receive no beats in return.
Now might be the best time
to wake up and learn 🌈🥁

These are all your words unedited as a demonstration of form. Take it with a grain of salt as it's just a suggestion. The message remains the same regardless.

Thank you I will take it with a grain of salt no worries.My poems are extracts from my journal and daily life.They are expressions of my thoughts and feelings.Like art poems are similar there is no right or wrong.Everyone needs to develope their own style.I appreciate the time you took to copy and paste and correct a few things Thank you.I will continue to write in my own way as I'd rather not be a poem sheep as I choose to be a Shepard 😃🌈

That is more reader friendly for sure.

Thank you 😊 🌈