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Detained
LSD and Pink Floyd
Anything to fill a void
After work, we leave at dark
On a road trip, we embark
Crossing the border in such haste
Without ID, citizen erased
Unsure where reality prevails
Experiencing beauty in details
Uncontrolled laughter, never known
Outside of self, as if a clone
Circling trees on tent flaps
No time at all, seems to lapse
Insane delusions of grandeur
Vivid, perfect, full of colour
Sounds of music, mesmerising
Riveting, captivating, electrifying
Performance finishes with a bow
Show has closed, goodbye for now
Departure amid a light streaming
Could not tell, if I was dreaming
Then, detained by the gentry
While bound for home at re-entry
Anything to fill a void
After work, we leave at dark
On a road trip, we embark
Crossing the border in such haste
Without ID, citizen erased
Unsure where reality prevails
Experiencing beauty in details
Uncontrolled laughter, never known
Outside of self, as if a clone
Circling trees on tent flaps
No time at all, seems to lapse
Insane delusions of grandeur
Vivid, perfect, full of colour
Sounds of music, mesmerising
Riveting, captivating, electrifying
Performance finishes with a bow
Show has closed, goodbye for now
Departure amid a light streaming
Could not tell, if I was dreaming
Then, detained by the gentry
While bound for home at re-entry
Published 18th Mar 2017
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18th Mar 2017 5:24am
18th Mar 2017 6:27am
Always an experience...Didn't need ID to get out...but apparently needed it to get back in and was not in the best frame of mind...lol
18th Mar 2017 4:11pm
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20th Mar 2017 9:47am
Bless you and thank you very much. That is what this site is for. Just give it a go and people offer friendly but honest critique. Then it becomes a learning process. I'd love to read something you have written:)
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