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'Legend, is a Twisted Mind...'
*For anyone interested in knowing
this is a short visual poem...but I
think good example of the 'battle rap'
my bros. n I had began years ago.
The characters in this piece,
Legend (Me)...his nemesis Terrain
(my bro.) are visually depicted...
Legend destroys Terrain
with in a few quick lines, n one
chest blow! lol.*
Hope all enjoy the destruction! lol
P.S. enlarge the pic. To read the poem :) or read below what is in pic. Below lol
I...
Tore his heart out, while it beat
tossed it aside, like a piece O' meat
The battle waged,
but mere moments in time
beaten badly, another victim finished
by design, n' decree as stated by thee one, n' only Twisted Mind...
Terrain is no more, n' unless others wanna follow suit
do yourself a tremendous favor n' scoot!!
Yours truly, Twisted Mind
BKA Legend...
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Re. 'Legend, is a Twisted Mind...'
16th Mar 2017 12:59pm
Is this for Webmiss' Visual Poetry comp?
I couldn't read it on my phone. It distorts when I try to enlarge. I'll check my laptop when I'm at my desk.
I couldn't read it on my phone. It distorts when I try to enlarge. I'll check my laptop when I'm at my desk.
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16th Mar 2017 1:20pm
No it's not ... I'm not into doing comps. But I'm grateful you came n read, n hope you can read the piece on your PC n :) thank you for reading g :)
Re. 'Legend, is a Twisted Mind...'
16th Mar 2017 1:42pm
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16th Mar 2017 11:41pm
So u were able to read it earlier? If so I'm glad, but if not I posted the words outside of the pic. Too lol. Thank you so much my friend :)
Re. 'Legend, is a Twisted Mind...'
16th Mar 2017 1:56pm
Read some of it wasn't able to see the whole thing since I was zooming in with my iPad.
So maybe it was a bit of a bad idea to make it a visual poem if the print is too small :(
So maybe it was a bit of a bad idea to make it a visual poem if the print is too small :(
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Re: Re. 'Legend, is a Twisted Mind...'
16th Mar 2017 11:56pm
I rewrote the words below so they are viewable now... thank you my pudding cup... Grateful always :)
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17th Mar 2017 00:14am
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16th Mar 2017 4:30pm
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17th Mar 2017 00:08am
Wow... this is a surprise... howdy stranger :) n thank you for the drop in n comment :)
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16th Mar 2017 5:56pm
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17th Mar 2017 00:19am
Re. 'Legend, is a Twisted Mind...'
18th Mar 2017 11:24am
You've got an energising mind my brother. Twitch and sway young man. You've gotta do both. You do 'em both beautifully. Champion!
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Re: Re. 'Legend, is a Twisted Mind...'
18th Mar 2017 12:59pm
Hey bro! It's great hearing you again n thanks for the very generous comment, I truly appreciate you... :)
Re. 'Legend, is a Twisted Mind...'
Anonymous
19th Mar 2017 3:08pm
a short but lyrical branding commanding mad respect!!
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19th Mar 2017 5:04pm
Re. 'Legend, is a Twisted Mind...'
20th Mar 2017 3:01pm
Awesome destruction ;-)
I have to admit that I enjoyed the description as much as I enjoyed the poem!
I have to admit that I enjoyed the description as much as I enjoyed the poem!
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Re: Re. 'Legend, is a Twisted Mind...'
20th Mar 2017 9:52pm
Aaaaawww my beauty ur a Lil twisted too huh? lol... thank you so much , I'm truly grateful for your continued support always. :)
Re. 'Legend, is a Twisted Mind...'
21st Mar 2017 11:15am
Hmmm, this is where troy and the lions' pride celebrating a kill merge madness with fury. I like the theme. I think I can imagine the sound of those lyrics- quite rare incident for me since I don't relate to rap easily. Hats off to you. Well done my friend!!!!
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Re: Re. 'Legend, is a Twisted Mind...'
21st Mar 2017 11:31am
Lol well how nice o of you to say that! Funny enough you mentioned u could almost hear me becuz I have a few Video poems on here... n thank u so much... :)