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Never Satiated
Storms brewing
ache for protection
reaching for something
Compulsion arises
thirsty obsession
never quenched
Uneasiness builds
spiralling downward
reeling renewed
Lost soul again
comfort stripped
no longer intact
Excruciating, unbearable
no balance, unstable
unable to hold
Imminent darkness
escorted to hell
over and over, yet again
ache for protection
reaching for something
Compulsion arises
thirsty obsession
never quenched
Uneasiness builds
spiralling downward
reeling renewed
Lost soul again
comfort stripped
no longer intact
Excruciating, unbearable
no balance, unstable
unable to hold
Imminent darkness
escorted to hell
over and over, yet again
Published 15th Mar 2017
| Edited 19th Feb 2024
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15th Mar 2017 6:57pm
Wasn't the kind of piece I expected based on the title but it was definitely an outstanding spill...
15th Mar 2017 7:35pm
Thank you dear, I was not sure of the title...looking to imply the darkness is never "satiated" by me. It may be too much...open to suggestions as this is not my usual style:)
16th Mar 2017 00:53am
I interpreted this as depression and/or addiction. Both being worthy adversaries as well as unquenchable beasts. Good thing you're wiser and stronger.
Anonymous
19th Mar 2017 7:42pm
I'm speechless on this. You write with intent, emotion and meaning. This is what makes your writing so beautiful, yet so Dark. I'm enjoying reading your poetry. Keep writing, your words are heart spoken.
19th Mar 2017 10:28pm
Thank you lovely...I write most often when in the dark. It is weirdly inspiring but can also be cathartic to write it out.
