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Insomnia
Escape to sleep
Dreams resist
Racing thoughts
Oblivion exists
Emotions linger
Pain appears
Morning’s onset
Novel fears
Silence echoes
Restlessness confines
Intervals pass
Ancient reminds
Brevity of slumber
Hollow imminence
Incessant withdraw
Absent resilience
Dreams resist
Racing thoughts
Oblivion exists
Emotions linger
Pain appears
Morning’s onset
Novel fears
Silence echoes
Restlessness confines
Intervals pass
Ancient reminds
Brevity of slumber
Hollow imminence
Incessant withdraw
Absent resilience
Published 9th Mar 2017
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Anonymous
9th Mar 2017 2:54am
Interesting collection of words here. I'm wondering if the fear of finishing your novel is keeping you awake or that simply, your worries are trivial.
9th Mar 2017 3:22am
Anonymous
9th Mar 2017 3:27am
Sounds like a nightmare. I'm not entirely surprised at guessing how you're feeling, especially having read some more of your work.
11th Mar 2017 9:58pm
Feels like one sometimes...Yes as stated, I can be a tortured soul but believe it or not, I am quite a positive person. lol
9th Mar 2017 10:03am
9th Mar 2017 10:26am
9th Mar 2017 11:36pm
Its exactly how Chuck explained it in Fight Club...."When you have insomnia, you are never really asleep, and you are never really awake". and "The insomnia distance of everything, you can't touch anything and nothing can touch." not being able to sleep sucks big time. I feel you. <3
11th Mar 2017 9:59pm
