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Relapse
Again I am existing in between
Petrified to stop and no way to wean
I saw the recoil before it came
Yet reverted to safety, just the same
Oh the storm, I saw it brewing
But my senses were just renewing
Observing the trenches of my soul
I knew the source would take it's toll
Open and wounded with no chain-mail
How do I recover and begin to sail?
Petrified to stop and no way to wean
I saw the recoil before it came
Yet reverted to safety, just the same
Oh the storm, I saw it brewing
But my senses were just renewing
Observing the trenches of my soul
I knew the source would take it's toll
Open and wounded with no chain-mail
How do I recover and begin to sail?
Published 3rd Mar 2017
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3rd Mar 2017 9:51pm
Everyone relapses at times. Trial and error is human nature. Welcome to DUP Mel44!
4th Mar 2017 12:10pm
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4th Mar 2017 10:51am
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4th Mar 2017 12:13pm
4th Mar 2017 8:06pm
Mel, you illustrate so well how one struggles with bad habits and addiction. I identify perhaps too closely with this passage: "Petrified to stop and no way to wean." Brava!
5th Mar 2017 5:32pm
Addiction is tricky...Just when you think you have it on it's knees, it downs an energy drink and comes out swinging. But I am not down for the count yet!
6th Mar 2017 6:25am
6th Mar 2017 8:43pm
Thank you and will do...Just submitted a prose on alcohol addiction if interested."Perception is the Key". Would appreciate feedback. Not just on writing...
28th Mar 2020 1:16pm
28th Feb 2024 10:03pm
On the themes of healing and recovery, this is a poignant and powerful piece
29th Feb 2024 5:39am
Dear Wallyroo,
It seems you have identified with this piece. Addiction is a harsh reality for some. Thanks for your kind response.
It seems you have identified with this piece. Addiction is a harsh reality for some. Thanks for your kind response.
28th Feb 2024 10:13pm
hello beautiful Mel there is no recovery for me so I don't know I am mentally ill and the closest I get to normal is by ingesting a Nazi drug every day...my heart goes out to you...I have tried all that mankind has to heal the brain they don't work this drug does... hugs beautiful 💕
29th Feb 2024 5:35am
Bless you lovely. It take the healing of mind, body and spirit to recover. Sending msg.
Bless
Mel
Bless
Mel
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